Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、もう少し具体的な詳細や理由を加えるとより良くなります。また、文のつながりを示す接続詞を使うと会話がより論理的になります。

예시: At my school, there are very few rules for students. For instance, we can dye our hair any color and wear any clothes we like. This freedom allows us to express our individuality, which in turn makes us feel more comfortable and confident during classes.

제안: 文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I don't think having more rules would benefit students because it would limit our freedom to express ourselves through our clothing and hair color, which is important for our individuality.

제안: 回答が不完全で繰り返しや言いよどみが多いです。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I have an English teacher from my first year of high school who does her job very well. She explains lessons clearly and always supports students when they have difficulties.

× I do not think students will benefit more from more rules because if there are more rules, we are we cannot express our ourselves through our clothes of hair color.

✓ I do not think students will benefit more from more rules because if there are more rules, we cannot express ourselves through our clothes or hair color.

The sentence contains redundant and incorrect pronoun usage such as 'we are we' and 'our ourselves'. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'ourselves' without 'our' before it. Also, 'clothes of hair color' is incorrect; it should be 'clothes or hair color' to indicate alternatives. Removing redundancy and correcting pronouns improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do have a teacher who does her her job very well.

✓ Yes, I do have a teacher who does her job very well.

The pronoun 'her' is repeated unnecessarily. Using 'her' once is sufficient to indicate possession. Removing the duplicate pronoun corrects the sentence.

× I met her in my high school, first year of high school and she was my she is an English teacher and she Oh my.

✓ I met her in my first year of high school. She was my English teacher.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated and incomplete phrases such as 'she was my she is an English teacher and she Oh my.' This causes confusion and breaks sentence structure rules. Splitting into two clear sentences and removing redundant words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.