Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجاباتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، واستخدم جمل كاملة ومترابطة. تجنب التكرار والأخطاء النحوية، وقدم تفاصيل محددة حول القواعد في مدرستك.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we must wear a uniform every day, and bringing outside food is not allowed. These rules help maintain discipline and cleanliness in the school environment.

제안: حاول فهم السؤال جيدًا قبل الإجابة، وقدم رأيًا واضحًا مع أسباب تدعم وجهة نظرك. استخدم جمل كاملة ومترابطة لتوضيح أفكارك.

예시: I believe that having more rules can help students focus better, but too many rules might make them feel restricted. Therefore, a balance is important to create a positive learning environment.

제안: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل واضح ومنظم، وقدم تفاصيل محددة عن المعلم الذي تعجبك طريقة تدريسه. استخدم كلمات مناسبة وتجنب الأخطاء اللغوية.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who teaches very well. She explains the subject clearly and always encourages us to ask questions, which helps me understand better.

× In my at my school, for example, the uniform, we must wear uniform for the and the at the school and we can't take with our food at the school.

✓ At my school, for example, the uniform, we must wear the uniform at school and we can't bring our food to school.

The original sentence contains incorrect prepositions such as 'for the' and 'take with our food at the school'. The correct prepositions are 'wear the uniform at school' and 'bring our food to school'. Using correct prepositions clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× Also want to be true and like so I think you know.

✓ I also want to be honest, so I think you know.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb, making it difficult to understand. Adding the subject 'I' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually, yes, I have never rescued and why is it too? She's a teacher, she gives the the subject very well and every time ask us.

✓ Actually, yes, I have a teacher who is very responsible. She's a teacher who explains the subject very well and always asks us questions.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear phrases like 'I have never rescued and why is it too?'. Replacing with correct pronouns and clearer expressions improves understanding and grammatical accuracy.