Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and pay attention during lessons. Also, talking during class is not allowed to maintain order.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they help us become more disciplined and keep the school environment orderly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Yes, I had an English teacher in grade 3 who did a very good job. She was very responsible and worked hard to help us improve our grades.

× Yes of course there are many rules in at my school such as student must wear wear the uniform in the school and also we should study carefully in a lesson and.

✓ Yes, of course, there are many rules at my school such as students must wear the uniform at school and also we should study carefully in lessons.

介词使用错误。'in at my school'应改为'at my school'，表示地点。'in the school'改为'at school'更自然。'in a lesson'改为'in lessons'，表示一般情况。

× Yes of course there are many rules in at my school such as student must wear wear the uniform in the school and also we should study carefully in a lesson and.

✓ Yes, of course, there are many rules at my school such as students must wear the uniform at school and also we should study carefully in lessons.

单复数错误。'student'应为复数'students'，因为指的是所有学生。'lesson'改为复数'lessons'，表示一般情况。

× Talk with other is not good.

✓ Talking with others is not good.

代词使用错误。'other'应为复数形式'others'，表示其他人。

× Yes, I think so, because the rules can make us disciplined and the and also make the school order orderly.

✓ Yes, I think so, because the rules can make us disciplined and also make the school orderly.

量词使用错误。'the school order orderly'中'order'多余，应去掉。

× Yes, of course, at grade 3, my English teacher did very good job.

✓ Yes, of course, in grade 3, my English teacher did a very good job.

时态和冠词错误。'did very good job'缺少冠词'a'，应为'did a very good job'。

× Yes, of course, at grade 3, my English teacher did very good job.

✓ Yes, of course, in grade 3, my English teacher did a very good job.

形容词和副词使用错误。'very good job'中'good'是形容词，前面需要冠词'a'。

× She's very responsible and she very, she worked very hard and to make our marks higher.

✓ She's very responsible and she worked very hard to make our marks higher.

代词和句子结构错误。'she very,'多余且不完整，应删除。句子应连贯表达。