Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и логичным. Избегайте противоречивых утверждений, например, "мы не должны быть трудолюбивыми" звучит нелогично. Также старайтесь использовать связующие слова для плавности речи и избегайте излишних повторов.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we have to wear a school uniform every day. Additionally, attendance is mandatory for all classes. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

제안: Ответ неполный и неясный. Следует формулировать мысли более чётко и завершённо. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы объяснить причины вашего мнения и избегайте незавершённых предложений.

예시: I don't think more rules would benefit students. In fact, having too many rules might make students feel restricted and behave noisily out of frustration.

제안: Старайтесь избегать частых пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh". Ответ должен быть более связным и содержательным, с использованием связующих слов для плавности и конкретных деталей для обогащения ответа.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She teaches Russian language and is very kind and easy-going. Moreover, I enjoy her lessons because she makes the material interesting and creates a comfortable learning atmosphere.

× Firstly, we should wear a school uniform every day and we shouldn't be hardworking and also we should go to all our classes.

✓ Firstly, we should wear a school uniform every day, we shouldn't be lazy, and we should go to all our classes.

The phrase 'we shouldn't be hardworking' is incorrect because 'hardworking' is a positive quality and should not be negated here. The intended meaning is likely 'we shouldn't be lazy'. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× I think no students may be very noisy and naughty when they understand that they would have more rules and.

✓ I think students may be very noisy and naughty when they understand that they would have more rules.

The sentence is incomplete and contains an unnecessary 'no' before 'students'. Removing 'no' and the trailing 'and' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× She's very kind and easy going person.

✓ She's a very kind and easy-going person.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very kind'. Also, 'easy going' should be hyphenated as 'easy-going' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.