Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать ошибок, таких как "there is a few rules" (правильно: "there are a few rules") и использовать более связные выражения. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для логичности и конкретизировать примеры правил.

예시: Actually, I'm currently at university, not school, and there are a few rules we have to follow. For example, we are not allowed to wear very revealing clothes or attend classes while intoxicated. Although these rules are not very strict, they serve an important purpose.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "wouldn't benefit more for more rules" и "more rebel". Следует использовать правильные предлоги и формы слов, а также связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because they might become more rebellious and less likely to follow strict regulations. In my opinion, students should have more freedom to encourage responsibility.

제안: Ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и неестественные выражения, например, "educated as international public law" и "she know, she knows what she doing". Следует использовать правильные времена и более естественные фразы, а также избегать разговорных слов, таких как "queen" в данном контексте.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who is very knowledgeable in international public law. She is an expert in this field and always explains the material clearly. I really appreciate her teaching style because she knows exactly what she is doing.

× there is a few rules for us

✓ there are a few rules for us

The phrase 'a few rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. 'There is' is used with singular nouns, while 'there are' is used with plural nouns.

× benefit more for more rules

✓ benefit more from more rules

The correct preposition to use with 'benefit' in this context is 'from', not 'for'. The phrase should be 'benefit more from more rules' to indicate the source of benefit.

× this strict rules

✓ these strict rules

The word 'rules' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'these' instead of 'this'. 'This' is used with singular nouns, 'these' with plural nouns.

× she know, she knows what she doing

✓ she knows what she is doing

The verb 'know' needs to be in third person singular present tense 'knows'. Also, 'she doing' is missing the auxiliary verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense, so it should be 'she is doing'.