Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific examples of rules. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must maintain neatness and cleanliness, complete all their homework on time, and speak only in designated areas. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Focus on expressing your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they promote discipline and help improve character. For instance, rules encourage self-discipline and motivate students to focus on their studies, which leads to better academic performance.

제안: Your answer should be more organized and clear. Start with a topic sentence, then give specific reasons why you admire the teacher. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher whom I admire very much. She teaches English and Social Studies and is very helpful. She provides extra support in different languages, gives personal career advice, and is friendly with all students, which makes learning enjoyable.

× The first thing is neatness and cleanliness and we should be disciplined without talking louder and we should maintain all we should do all the homeworks on sign and we should only speak in some of the provided by our school.

✓ The first things are neatness and cleanliness, and we should be disciplined without talking loudly. We should maintain everything, do all the homework on time, and only speak in the places provided by our school.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'and' repeatedly without proper punctuation or conjunctions, causing confusion. Also, 'talking louder' should be 'talking loudly' (adverb). 'Homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable. 'On sign' is unclear and corrected to 'on time'. The sentence is split for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× we should do all the homeworks on sign

✓ we should do all the homework on time

The word 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. Also, 'on sign' is incorrect and replaced with 'on time' to convey the intended meaning.

× without talking louder

✓ without talking loudly

The word 'louder' is a comparative adjective, but here an adverb is needed to describe the verb 'talking'. Therefore, 'loudly' is the correct form.

× I feel that, uh, I feel that homes improve the child live at all me too.

✓ I feel that homes improve a child's life overall, and I agree too.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Child live' should be 'child's life'. 'At all me too' is incorrect and replaced with 'overall, and I agree too' for clarity and correctness.

× And I feel that we are very important for each and every child.

✓ And I feel that rules are very important for each and every child.

The pronoun 'we' is incorrectly used here; the intended subject is likely 'rules'. Replacing 'we' with 'rules' clarifies the meaning.

× motivate towards village

✓ motivate towards values

The phrase 'motivate towards village' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended word is 'values', which fits the context of character and self-discipline improvement.

× I have a favorite teacher. I'm from NEMA and was nice Masterjohn.

✓ I have a favorite teacher. I'm from NEMA, and her name is Masterjohn.

The phrase 'was nice Masterjohn' is incorrect. It should be 'her name is Masterjohn' to correctly introduce the teacher.

× I'm also teaches English and social

✓ She also teaches English and Social Studies

The subject 'I' with 'teaches' is incorrect. It should be 'She also teaches' to agree in third person singular. Also, 'social' is expanded to 'Social Studies' for clarity.

× she provides All in all languages aside for and even she helps us and loving our career and giving personal suggestions

✓ She provides support in all languages, helps us, loves our career growth, and gives personal suggestions

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'All in all languages aside for' is corrected to 'support in all languages'. 'Loving our career' is corrected to 'loves our career growth' for proper verb form and clarity.

× and she is very friendly with each of us and I feel who's the best speech of and I admire her.

✓ She is very friendly with each of us, and I feel she is the best teacher. I admire her.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Who's the best speech of' is incorrect and replaced with 'she is the best teacher' for clarity and correctness.