Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, say "Students must keep their uniforms clean and tidy" instead of "they tight."

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must keep their uniforms clean and tidy. Also, they are not allowed to use their phones during class to avoid distractions.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say "Yes, I believe more rules would help students improve their discipline and performance both at school and at home."

예시: Yes, I believe more rules would help students improve their discipline and performance both at school and at home. This would encourage better habits and responsibility.

제안: Your answer has good content but some vocabulary and grammar issues. Avoid using informal or unclear words like "FIRE" and use correct pronouns. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, say "They were strict but fair, which helped maintain discipline. Because of their clear instructions and supportive attitude, I was able to focus and learn a lot."

예시: Yes, I had a teacher when I was younger who did their job very well. They were strict but fair, which helped maintain discipline in the classroom. Because of their clear instructions and supportive attitude, I was able to focus and learn a lot.

× For example, student must always keep their uniforms clean and they tight.

✓ For example, students must always keep their uniforms clean and tight.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural possessive pronoun 'their' and the plural noun 'uniforms'. Also, 'they tight' is incorrect; 'tight' should directly describe 'uniforms' without 'they'.

× Also there are not allowed to use their phone during class to avoid distraction.

✓ Also, they are not allowed to use their phones during class to avoid distraction.

The sentence lacks a clear subject; 'they' should be used as the subject. 'Phone' should be plural 'phones' to match 'they'. The verb phrase should be 'are not allowed' instead of 'are not allowed to'.

× Yes, of course, 100% because like that everyone we can improve excellent in your job, in your house, wherever they want.

✓ Yes, of course, 100%, because like that everyone can improve excellently in their job, in their house, wherever they want.

The pronoun 'we' is incorrectly used; it should be 'everyone can' as the subject. 'Excellent' is an adjective but should be the adverb 'excellently' to modify 'improve'. Also, 'your' should be 'their' to maintain third person.

× Yes, I have a teacher when I was younger who did their job very well.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher when I was younger who did his or her job very well.

The pronoun 'their' is plural, but 'a teacher' is singular. It should be 'his or her' to agree with the singular noun 'teacher'. Also, 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was younger'.

× They were straight but FIRE, which helped maintain discipline in my classroom.

✓ They were strict but fair, which helped maintain discipline in my classroom.

The words 'straight' and 'FIRE' are incorrect here. The correct adjectives are 'strict' (meaning firm) and 'fair' (meaning just). Capitalisation of 'FIRE' is also incorrect.

× Because of their clear clues and supportive attitude, I was able to learn a lot and take focus.

✓ Because of their clear clues and supportive attitude, I was able to learn a lot and stay focused.

The phrase 'take focus' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'stay focused'. The rest of the sentence is correct.