Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. For example, say "Yes, there are many rules for students at my school."

예시: Yes, there are many rules for students at my school to ensure discipline and safety.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons. For example, "Yes, I think more rules would help students stay clean and polite because they encourage good behaviour."

예시: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they promote cleanliness and politeness, helping students become better individuals.

제안: Your answer is brief and contains a grammatical error. Provide a clear topic sentence and add supporting details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I have a teacher named Kunta who does his job very well because he explains lessons clearly and is very patient."

예시: Yes, I have a teacher called Kunta who does his job very well because he explains lessons clearly and is very patient with students.

× Yes we have at my at my school have the many rules for students.

✓ Yes, we have many rules for students at my school.

The original sentence has redundant words and incorrect plural usage. 'the many rules' is incorrect; it should be 'many rules' without 'the'. Also, the phrase 'at my at my school have' is repetitive and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and uses the plural 'rules' correctly.

× Yes we have at my at my school have the many rules for students.

✓ Yes, we have many rules for students at my school.

The sentence structure is incorrect due to repeated phrases and misplaced words. The phrase 'at my at my school have' is confusing and disrupts sentence flow. Rearranging the sentence to 'Yes, we have many rules for students at my school' corrects the structure and improves clarity.

× Yes, I think so 'cause it's my student clean and polite.

✓ Yes, I think so because it helps students to be clean and polite.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The phrase 'it's my student clean and polite' is incorrect. The intended meaning seems to be that more rules help students be clean and polite. Rephrasing to 'because it helps students to be clean and polite' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× A good a good person is make student to be good people.

✓ A good person helps students to become good people.

The original sentence is repetitive ('A good a good person') and ungrammatical ('is make student to be good people'). The corrected sentence removes repetition and uses correct verb forms to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I've have.

✓ Yes, I have.

The phrase 'I've have' is incorrect because 'I've' is a contraction of 'I have', so 'I've have' is redundant. The correct form is simply 'I have' or 'I've'. Here, 'Yes, I have.' is appropriate.