Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there any rules for students at your school?
수험생
Yes, there are some strict rules in our school. First of all, we need to stick to our uniform. Uh, we can't wear anything we want, just the uniform. Uh, also as girls, we need to have our hair up all the time. Also, uh, boys can't have long hair and we can't put on makeup.
시험관
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
수험생
Yes, I think in some areas, as students, we benefit from those rules. It keeps us on track.
시험관
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
수험생
Yes, I really like my math teacher. She tries always to keep us entertained while we learn. She also makes sure that we benefit from what we're learning. She always do do some tests to help us keep.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer covers the main points but includes filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to avoid unnecessary pauses and fillers to sound more natural. Also, organize your answer with clear linking words to improve coherence, for example, use 'Firstly', 'Secondly', and 'Finally' to list rules clearly.
예시: Yes, there are several strict rules at our school. Firstly, all students must wear the school uniform without exceptions. Secondly, female students are required to keep their hair tied up at all times. Finally, boys are not allowed to have long hair, and makeup is prohibited for all students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, provide specific reasons or examples explaining how rules help students. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make your answer more coherent and informative.
예시: Yes, I believe students benefit from having rules because they help maintain discipline and focus. For example, rules about punctuality encourage us to be on time, which improves our learning experience.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer shows positive feelings but has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. To improve, use correct verb forms and complete your ideas clearly. Also, add linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect your points smoothly.
예시: Yes, I really like my math teacher because she always tries to keep us entertained while we learn. She also ensures that we understand the material by giving regular tests, which help us remember the lessons better.
문법
× She always do do some tests to help us keep.
✓ She always does some tests to help us keep.
The subject 'She' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'does' instead of 'do'. Also, the repetition 'do do' is incorrect and should be corrected to a single 'does'. This ensures subject-verb agreement and correct verb form usage.
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