Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we have a strict dress code that everyone must follow. Additionally, students are expected to be punctual and respectful to teachers. These rules help maintain discipline and create a positive learning environment.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases and check grammar for clarity.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules at school. For instance, additional rules could teach students better time management and responsibility. Moreover, clear regulations help create a structured environment that supports learning.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the teacher using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases to improve clarity.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. His name is Prakash, and he taught me in 12th grade. He is very punctual and always prepared for class. Because of his dedication, I learned a lot and enjoyed his lessons.

× Yes, there are a lot of rules for the children in the schools because this is the main role of the school being in the principals.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules for the children in the schools because this is the main role of the school principals.

The phrase 'being in the principals' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the student intended to refer to the role of the school principals. The pronoun and preposition usage here is incorrect, so removing 'being in the' clarifies the sentence.

× Like there are many examples like dress code and many others.

✓ For example, there are many rules such as the dress code and others.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'like' redundantly. Starting with 'For example' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× According to me, yes, I think that students would be more beneficial if the schools put more rules in the put more rules and regulations, because they can learn how to manage the time, how to being in the principal and all.

✓ In my opinion, yes, I think that students would benefit more if the schools put more rules and regulations in place, because they can learn how to manage their time and how to behave properly.

The phrase 'would be more beneficial' is incorrect; 'students would benefit more' is correct. The repetition 'put more rules in the put more rules' is an error. 'How to being in the principal' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it likely means 'how to behave properly' or 'how to follow the principal's rules.' The sentence is corrected for clarity, grammar, and meaning.

× Yes, uh, my all DJs are very well in his their jobs, but particularly, particularly I wanna mention in my ace teacher whose name is Prakash in my 12th grade.

✓ Yes, all my teachers are very good at their jobs, but particularly, I want to mention my best teacher, whose name is Prakash, from my 12th grade.

'My all DJs' is incorrect; it should be 'all my teachers.' 'Very well in his their jobs' is incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing; 'very good at their jobs' is correct. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to.' 'Ace teacher' is informal; 'best teacher' is more appropriate.

× He's very punctual and that's the special thing in his job.

✓ He is very punctual, and that's a special quality in his job.

The phrase 'that's the special thing in his job' is awkward. Using 'a special quality' is clearer and more natural. Also, contractions like 'He's' are expanded for formality.