Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when I in school”和“for keep our behavior correct”。建议你使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且回答时尽量简洁明了。

예시: Yes, there are many rules at my school to help students behave properly. For example, we are not allowed to speak during class.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“what thing can do and what cannot”。建议你使用更准确的表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because when I was young, I didn't always know what was allowed and what wasn't. Therefore, rules help us correct our behavior.

제안: 你的回答语法错误较多，且表达不完整，如“does his does her job”和“she have some role”。建议你注意主谓一致，使用完整句子，并且清晰表达观点。

예시: Yes, I have a high school teacher who does her job very well. She teaches clearly and helps improve our behavior through her guidance.

× Yes, when I in school there are many rules for keep our behavior correct.

✓ Yes, when I am in school there are many rules to keep our behavior correct.

句子中缺少动词“am”，导致时态错误。应使用现在时态的be动词“am”来表达“我在学校”。另外，“for keep”应改为“to keep”，表示目的。

× For example we cannot speaking during class.

✓ For example, we cannot speak during class.

情态动词cannot后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式“speaking”。

× Yes, I think students will benefit more from more rules because when I was young I didn't know what thing can do and what cannot.

✓ Yes, I think students will benefit more from more rules because when I was young I didn't know what things I could do and what I could not.

“thing”应为复数“things”，且“can”应改为过去时“could”，以符合过去时态。

× Yes, I think students will benefit more from more rules because when I was young I didn't know what thing can do and what cannot.

✓ Yes, I think students will benefit more from more rules because when I was young I didn't know what things I could do and what I could not.

“thing”应使用复数形式“things”，因为指的是多种事情。

× So when you have some rules you can correct your behaviors.

✓ So when you have some rules you can correct your behavior.

“behavior”通常作为不可数名词使用，不用复数形式。

× Yes, I think my high school teacher does his does her job very well because she teach well and she have some role and can improve our behaviors.

✓ Yes, I think my high school teacher does his or her job very well because she teaches well and she has some role and can improve our behavior.

第三人称单数主语“she”后动词应加-s，如“teaches”和“has”。“does his does her”应为“does his or her”。“behaviors”应为不可数名词“behavior”。

× So I think he.

✓ So I think so.

句子不完整，缺少谓语或宾语，需补充“so”使句子完整。