Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'roles' instead of 'rules' and 'a student have' instead of 'a student has'. To improve, use correct grammar and be more precise. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details using linking words.

예시: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For instance, students must arrive by 7:00 AM and leave by 1:00 PM. Additionally, wearing the school uniform is mandatory. These rules help maintain discipline and order.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear, with grammatical mistakes like 'the student will get more regulation' and 'when they want doing something they have'. To improve, provide a clear opinion with supporting reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Make sure your sentences are complete and meaningful.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because it helps them develop discipline and responsibility. For example, having clear guidelines can prevent distractions and improve focus during classes.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Avoid repeating phrases like 'she helps us' multiple times. Instead, provide specific examples of how the teacher supports students and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, explain how her help boosts your confidence.

예시: Yes, we have a teacher who performs her job excellently. She assists us with our homework and explains difficult topics clearly. Because of her support, we feel more confident in our studies.

× For example, a student have to be in school at 7:00 and they will go home by 1:00.

✓ For example, a student has to be in school at 7:00 and they will go home by 1:00.

The subject 'a student' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yeah, actually the student will get more regulation in their lives.

✓ Yeah, actually the students will get more regulations in their lives.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural possessive pronoun 'their'. Also, 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to indicate multiple rules. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For instance, when they want doing something they have.

✓ For instance, when they want to do something, they have to.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to do' instead of the gerund 'doing'. This is an issue with verb + -ing form usage.

× She is very good for some.

✓ She is very good to some.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'good to' is the correct phrase to express kindness or helpfulness towards someone. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× She helps us and she helps us in our homework and she helps us.

✓ She helps us with our homework and supports us.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. It should be restructured for clarity and conciseness. This is a sentence structure error.