Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'very several' nên là 'several' hoặc 'many', và câu cuối 'This will help maintain the creative pleasing' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we have to wear uniforms and red scarves every day to show our school spirit. Additionally, students must keep the school environment clean by not littering and maintaining tidy classrooms. These rules help create a pleasant and productive learning atmosphere.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như 'student go more benefit' và 'keep the everyday clean'.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, stricter rules about cleanliness can teach students to take better care of their environment. Also, wearing proper uniforms can prepare them for professional settings in the future.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ như 'biology teachers' nên là 'biology teacher', 'makes my lessons interest' nên là 'makes my lessons interesting', và 'brings her past' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng chính xác và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I have a biology teacher who does her job very well. She makes lessons interesting by using real-life examples and interactive activities. For example, she sometimes brings specimens to class, which helps students stay engaged and excited about learning.

× Well, there are very several rules for students at my school.

✓ Well, there are several rules for students at my school.

The phrase 'very several' is incorrect because 'several' already indicates an indefinite but small number, and 'very' is not used to modify 'several'. The correct usage is simply 'several'.

× students are expected to take care of the school environment by not littering and keep the classroom clean.

✓ students are expected to take care of the school environment by not littering and keeping the classroom clean.

After 'by', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form to indicate the means or method. Therefore, 'keep' should be changed to 'keeping'.

× This will help maintain the creative pleasing.

✓ This will help maintain a creative and pleasing environment.

The phrase 'the creative pleasing' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a noun to describe what is creative and pleasing. Adding 'a creative and pleasing environment' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I think student go more benefit for more rules because they change.

✓ Yes, I think students benefit more from more rules because they change.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'go' (which is also incorrect). Also, 'go more benefit for' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'benefit more from'.

× Yes, I think student go more benefit for more rules because they change.

✓ Yes, I think students benefit more from more rules because they change.

The verb 'go' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb is 'benefit' in the present tense to match the subject 'students'.

× Their children will learn how to take care of themselves about the environment by not littering and keep the everyday clean.

✓ Their children will learn how to take care of themselves and the environment by not littering and keeping the environment clean every day.

The phrase 'take care of themselves about the environment' is incorrect; it should be 'take care of themselves and the environment'. Also, 'keep the everyday clean' is unclear; it should be 'keeping the environment clean every day'.

× Another reason is that they need to wear the excellent uniform to the office in the future.

✓ Another reason is that they need to wear an excellent uniform to the office in the future.

The adjective 'excellent' is correct, but the article 'the' is incorrect here because 'uniform' is singular and unspecified. It should be 'an excellent uniform'.

× Yes, I do have a teacher who performs her job very well.

✓ Yes, I do have a teacher who performs her job very well.

This sentence is correct and does not contain a grammar mistake.

× For example, is my biology teachers who makes my lessons interest by using real life examples and interact activities.

✓ For example, my biology teacher makes my lessons interesting by using real-life examples and interactive activities.

'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to agree with 'my'. 'Makes' is correct for singular subject. 'Interest' should be 'interesting' (adjective). 'Interact activities' should be 'interactive activities'.

× For instance, she sometimes brings her past to class which helps the students more engage and excited about learning.

✓ For instance, she sometimes brings her past experiences to class which helps the students be more engaged and excited about learning.

The phrase 'brings her past' is unclear; it should be 'brings her past experiences'. Also, 'helps the students more engage' is incorrect; it should be 'helps the students be more engaged'.