Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, ‘prepple’은 의미가 불분명하고 문법적으로 ‘I don’t particularly like buying shoes’가 자연스럽습니다. ‘every seasons’, ‘one shoes’는 각각 ‘every season’, ‘one pair of shoes’로 고쳐야 하며, 계절별 신발의 예시는 연결어를 사용해 명확하게 제시하세요. 또한 ‘an Ugg’보다는 ‘Ugg boots’가 자연스럽고, 답변을 2~3개의 간결한 문장으로 정리하면 더 효과적입니다.

예시: No, I don’t particularly like buying shoes. I usually buy only one pair each season because I wear slippers or sandals in summer and Ugg boots in winter.

제안: 온라인 구매 경험과 구체적인 문제를 제시해 내용은 적절합니다. 다만 ‘Yes, I kind of bought’는 ‘Yes, I’ve bought’로, ‘like 3 times’는 ‘about three times’로, ‘a size issues’는 ‘sizing issues’로 수정하세요. ‘I don’t prefer to buying’ 대신 ‘I prefer not to buy’ 또는 ‘I don’t like buying’을 사용하고, ‘However’나 ‘As a result’ 같은 연결어를 활용하면 답변의 흐름이 더 자연스러워집니다.

예시: Yes, I’ve bought shoes online about three times. However, I had sizing issues every time—the shoes were either too small or too large. As a result, I prefer trying shoes on in a store before buying them.

제안: 금액을 말하려고 했지만 ‘10,001’의 단위와 의미가 불분명하고, ‘Korea Shimano’는 자연스러운 표현이 아닙니다. 한국 원화라면 ‘10,000 Korean won’처럼 정확히 말해야 하며, ‘every every year’는 ‘each year’로 고치세요. 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 그 금액을 쓰는 이유나 구매 빈도를 한 문장으로 덧붙이면 내용이 더 완성됩니다.

예시: I usually spend about 100,000 Korean won on shoes each year. I don’t buy shoes very often, so I prefer to choose one reasonably priced and durable pair.

제안: 선호를 분명히 밝힌 점은 좋지만, ‘compatible shoes’는 이 문맥에서 ‘comfortable shoes’가 맞습니다. ‘it’s good for health’는 ‘they’re better for my feet and health’처럼 구체화하고, ‘to feed the customer’는 의미가 맞지 않으므로 삭제하거나 ‘to follow fashion trends’로 바꾸세요. ‘because’ 뒤에 편안함의 이유와 실제 상황을 연결해 말하면 더 자연스럽고 효과적입니다.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones. They’re better for my feet, especially when I have to walk for a long time. Besides, I don’t want to replace my shoes constantly just to follow fashion trends.

× No I don't prepple to buy shoes because to every seasons I need only one shoes like in summer I use slippers or sandal and even it's in winter I used to wear an Ugg.

✓ No, I don't prefer to buy shoes because I only need one pair of shoes for each season. In summer, I wear slippers or sandals, and even in winter, I wear UGG boots.

The phrase one shoes is incorrect because one pair refers to a pair of shoes. Also, sandal should be plural because the speaker is referring to sandals in general. Use one pair of shoes and slippers or sandals.

× No I don't prepple to buy shoes because to every seasons I need only one shoes like in summer I use slippers or sandal and even it's in winter I used to wear an Ugg.

✓ No, I don't prefer to buy shoes because I only need one pair of shoes for each season. In summer, I wear slippers or sandals, and even in winter, I wear UGG boots.

The preposition to is incorrect before every season. Use for each season to express the purpose or situation. Also, say in winter rather than even it is in winter.

× No I don't prepple to buy shoes because to every seasons I need only one shoes like in summer I use slippers or sandal and even it's in winter I used to wear an Ugg.

✓ No, I don't prefer to buy shoes because I only need one pair of shoes for each season. In summer, I wear slippers or sandals, and even in winter, I wear UGG boots.

An UGG is not the natural noun form in this sentence. UGG boots is the appropriate expression, and no article is needed before the brand name when it is used as an adjective.

× Yes I kind of bought shoes online before like 3 times but every time there's a size issues like too small or too big. So now I don't prefer to buying shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online about three times, but every time there has been a size issue: they were either too small or too big. So now I don't prefer to buy shoes online.

The noun after there is must agree with the verb. Since the sentence refers to one issue, use there has been a size issue. The present perfect form has been is suitable for repeated experiences up to now.

× Yes I kind of bought shoes online before like 3 times but every time there's a size issues like too small or too big. So now I don't prefer to buying shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online about three times, but every time there has been a size issue: they were either too small or too big. So now I don't prefer to buy shoes online.

Size issue must be singular because the sentence uses every time and refers to one problem on each occasion. Use a size issue, not a size issues.

× Yes I kind of bought shoes online before like 3 times but every time there's a size issues like too small or too big. So now I don't prefer to buying shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online about three times, but every time there has been a size issue: they were either too small or too big. So now I don't prefer to buy shoes online.

After prefer, use the infinitive form to buy in this structure. Do not use to buying. The correct pattern is prefer to + base verb.

× In every every year I spend 10,001 in Korea Shimano. I use money on shoes.

✓ Every year, I spend 10,001 Korean won on shoes.

Use on after spend when describing the thing the money is used for. The expression spend money on shoes is correct. Every year does not need the preposition in.

× Absolutely compatible shoes because it's good for health and there's no use to change shoes every time to feed the customer.

✓ Absolutely, comfortable shoes, because they are good for my health, and there is no point in changing shoes every time to please other people.

Compatible does not express the intended meaning in this answer. Comfortable is the correct adjective because it describes shoes that feel good to wear. Also, use they for plural shoes instead of it.

× Absolutely compatible shoes because it's good for health and there's no use to change shoes every time to feed the customer.

✓ Absolutely, comfortable shoes, because they are good for my health, and there is no point in changing shoes every time to please other people.

After the expression no point in, use a gerund ending in -ing. Therefore, changing is correct, not to change. The pattern is there is no point in + verb-ing.