Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng và có tần suất cụ thể (“once a year”). Tuy nhiên, cụm “to explain Warner's sneakers” có vẻ bị dùng sai hoặc bị nhận diện nhầm; em nên nói trực tiếp lý do mua giày, chẳng hạn “to replace my old sneakers” hoặc “to get something more comfortable for classes”. Không nên đặt câu hỏi ngược lại cho giám khảo (“Want to...?”), vì câu này không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Em có thể dùng từ nối như “Also” hoặc “because” để liên kết lý do tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I really like buying shoes, but I usually buy only one new pair a year. I tend to shop at the start of the school year because I need comfortable sneakers for classes. I usually choose a simple pair that goes well with most of my clothes.

제안: Em trả lời đúng hướng nhưng có nhiều lỗi về độ trôi chảy và cấu trúc: lặp “I”, “those”, dùng sai “alive”, “those years”, và “shoe” cần ở dạng số nhiều. Cụm “felt more comfortable to choose shoe online” nên sửa thành “found it more convenient to choose shoes online”. Hãy trả lời bằng cấu trúc rõ ràng: “Yes, I have. Recently, I’ve been buying shoes online more often because...”. Em cũng nên nêu một lợi ích cụ thể như sự tiện lợi, nhiều lựa chọn hoặc dễ so sánh giá.

예시: Yes, I have. In fact, I’ve been buying shoes online more often in recent years because it’s convenient and there are usually more styles to choose from. I can also compare prices and read customer reviews before making a purchase.

제안: Em đã cung cấp mức giá cụ thể, nhưng cấu trúc câu còn nhiều lỗi. Không nói “my pair of shoes often are fluctuate”; nên dùng “A pair of shoes usually costs...” hoặc “I usually spend between...”. “600,000 Vietnam” nên sửa thành “600,000 Vietnamese dong”. Em cũng cần tránh lặp ý giữa hai câu và có thể thêm một lý do ngắn để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I usually spend between 500,000 and 600,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair of shoes. That’s a reasonable price for me because I want something durable but still affordable. I might spend more if I’m buying high-quality sports shoes.

제안: Em đã nêu được lựa chọn là giày thoải mái, nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp: “show small” cần sửa thành “shoes”, “comfortable helps me confident” thành “comfortable shoes make me feel confident”, và “more activities more active” cần diễn đạt lại. Câu trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp bằng “I prefer comfortable shoes”. Sau đó, giải thích rằng chúng giúp em cảm thấy tự tin, thư giãn và di chuyển dễ dàng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ “comfortable” quá nhiều bằng cách dùng thêm “practical” hoặc “easy to wear”.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for several hours every day. They make me feel relaxed and confident, especially when I’m walking around school or taking part in activities. Fashionable designs are nice, but comfort is more important to me.

× Yes, absolutely I I have also alive more frequently those those years recently because I I felt more comfortable to choose shoe online.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have also bought shoes online more frequently in recent years because I feel more comfortable choosing shoes online.

After have, the main verb must be in the past participle form. The past participle of buy is bought, not alive. The phrase in recent years is the correct prepositional expression for a period continuing until now.

× Yes, absolutely I I have also alive more frequently those those years recently because I I felt more comfortable to choose shoe online.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have also bought shoes online more frequently in recent years because I feel more comfortable choosing shoes online.

Shoes should be plural because the speaker is referring to shoes in general, not one specific shoe.

× Yes, absolutely I I have also alive more frequently those those years recently because I I felt more comfortable to choose shoe online.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have also bought shoes online more frequently in recent years because I feel more comfortable choosing shoes online.

The sentence describes the speaker's current feeling, so the present tense feel is more appropriate than the past tense felt.

× Yes, absolutely I I have also alive more frequently those those years recently because I I felt more comfortable to choose shoe online.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have also bought shoes online more frequently in recent years because I feel more comfortable choosing shoes online.

After feel comfortable, a gerund is natural when describing an activity. Therefore, choosing is more appropriate than to choose in this sentence.

× Well, my pair of shoes often are fluctuate between about 500 to 600,000 Vietnam.

✓ Well, the price of a pair of shoes often fluctuates between 500,000 and 600,000 Vietnamese dong.

The subject is the price, which is singular, so the verb must be fluctuates. Also, a pair of shoes is treated as a singular unit when it is the subject.

× Well, my pair of shoes often are fluctuate between about 500 to 600,000 Vietnam.

✓ Well, the price of a pair of shoes often fluctuates between 500,000 and 600,000 Vietnamese dong.

This sentence describes a usual price range, so the present simple is required. The correct form is fluctuates, not are fluctuate.

× Well, my pair of shoes often are fluctuate between about 500 to 600,000 Vietnam.

✓ Well, the price of a pair of shoes often fluctuates between 500,000 and 600,000 Vietnamese dong.

When using between, the two values should be connected with and, not to. The correct pattern is between X and Y.

× It is uh, average cost of the shoes.

✓ It is the average cost of a pair of shoes.

A singular countable noun phrase needs an article. The phrase average cost requires the before it when referring to a particular average, and a pair of shoes is more natural when speaking generally.

× I would love to have a comfortable show small because I think comfortable helps me uh confident and relaxed in in my feet and I can do more activities more active.

✓ I would love to have comfortable shoes because I think comfort helps me feel confident and relaxed on my feet, and I can do more activities more actively.

Because the answer discusses shoes in general, shoes should be plural. The word show is not the correct plural noun here; the intended word is shoes.

× I would love to have a comfortable show small because I think comfortable helps me uh confident and relaxed in in my feet and I can do more activities more active.

✓ I would love to have comfortable shoes because I think comfort helps me feel confident and relaxed on my feet, and I can do more activities more actively.

The structure helps me confident is incomplete because help is followed by an object and a base verb. The correct structure is helps me feel confident.

× I would love to have a comfortable show small because I think comfortable helps me uh confident and relaxed in in my feet and I can do more activities more active.

✓ I would love to have comfortable shoes because I think comfort helps me feel confident and relaxed on my feet, and I can do more activities more actively.

The fixed expression is on my feet, not in my feet, when describing how someone feels while standing or walking.

× I would love to have a comfortable show small because I think comfortable helps me uh confident and relaxed in in my feet and I can do more activities more active.

✓ I would love to have comfortable shoes because I think comfort helps me feel confident and relaxed on my feet, and I can do more activities more actively.

Comfortable is an adjective and cannot be used as the noun referring to the quality of shoes. The noun comfort is needed. Also, actively is an adverb because it modifies the verb do.