Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法と語順の誤りを直し、主題文を明確にした上で、理由を一つか二つの具体例で支えると自然になります。例えば冠詞（a/an/the）や複数形、動詞の一致を確認してください。また冗長な表現を避け、文は最大5文にまとめましょう。

예시: I don't like buying shoes because they are usually expensive, and I don't need many pairs. Therefore, I rarely buy new shoes — maybe once every couple of years when my current ones wear out.

제안: 時制と語彙の選択を直し、理由を論理的に述べる練習をしてください。'try'の適切な形（try them on）や代名詞の一致（it → them）を使い、理由を繋げる接続語（because, so, therefore）で整えましょう。具体例（失敗したサイズ経験）を加えると説得力が増します。

예시: I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on first to check the fit. For example, last time I bought shoes without trying them on they were too tight, so now I avoid online purchases.

제안: 文の断片化や誤った語彙（do fast）を直し、金額や頻度について一貫した短い説明をしてください。句読点を正しく使い、'always'の位置と文の流れを改善しましょう。具体的にどんな靴を買うのか説明すると良いです。

예시: I usually spend about ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes. I mainly buy sneakers for daily use, so I try to choose affordable but durable brands.

제안: 答えは明確ですが文法と語順が崩れています。理由を一文で述べ、続けて一つ具体例（徒歩の頻度や場面）を付け加えてください。'make my walk comfortable' のように表現を自然に直し、不要な繰り返しを避けてください。

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they make walking easier for me. Since I walk a lot to commute and run errands, I choose shoes with good cushioning and support.

× I don't like buying shoes because shoes is expensive and I don't need many shoes.

✓ I don't like buying shoes because shoes are expensive and I don't need many pairs of shoes.

The noun 'shoes' is plural, so it requires the plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'many shoes' is grammatically acceptable but sounding repetitive; 'many pairs of shoes' is more natural in English. Suggestion: use plural verbs with plural nouns and use 'pair(s) of' when referring to footwear.

× I have never bought shoes online because I tried to try the shoes before buying it.

✓ I have never bought shoes online because I try to try the shoes on before buying them.

Mismatch of tense and incorrect singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'shoes'. Also the verb phrase 'try to try' is incorrect and redundant; the correct expression is 'try on' for clothing/footwear. Use 'them' to refer to 'shoes' (plural). Ensure consistent present perfect/ present simple depending on intended meaning.

× I think shoes it's important for their size.

✓ I think shoes are important because of their size.

Incorrect use of 'it's' (it is) referring to plural 'shoes' causes mismatched pronoun/verb. Use 'are' with plural nouns. 'For their size' is awkward; 'because of their size' clarifies the reason. Maintain agreement between subject and verb and use appropriate connectors.

× I usually spend ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes. I. Always buy sneakers or do fast so it's not. Expensive.

✓ I usually spend ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes. I always buy sneakers or cheap ones, so they are not expensive.

Sentence fragments and punctuation errors ('I.' isolated). 'Do fast' is incorrect; likely intended 'cheap' or 'buy cheap ones'. 'It's not expensive' must match plural 'sneakers' so use 'they are not expensive'. Ensure complete sentences, correct word choice, and subject-verb agreement.

× I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because comfortable shoes make my. Walk comfortable I often walk so that shoes is.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because comfortable shoes make my walking comfortable. I often walk, so those shoes are important.

Multiple issues: fragments ('make my. Walk comfortable'), incorrect noun form 'walk' should be 'walking' (gerund) to follow 'make my'. 'Shoes is' uses singular verb with plural noun; use 'shoes are' or 'those shoes are'. Reorganize to form coherent sentences and use gerund for activities (walking).