Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and accurate: answer the question about shoes (not socks/suits), give a clear frequency, and use correct nouns and simple grammar. Keep it to 2–3 sentences. Replace repeated phrases with more precise vocabulary (e.g., “quality over quantity,” “once or twice a year”).

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don’t buy them very often. I usually buy shoes once or twice a year and I prefer quality over quantity.

제안: Keep the answer concise and focused. State clearly whether you have bought online, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g., “fit,” “material,” “quality,” “misleading photos”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” and avoid repeating incorrect words (suit/socks).

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in a store to check the fit and material. Also, online photos can be misleading, so I shop in person to make sure the shoes are comfortable.

제안: Answer with an approximate amount or range and a brief reason. Be precise: give currency or general range (e.g., “around $50–$100”) and explain why you spend that much (quality, comfort). Avoid confusing phrases and repetition.

예시: I usually spend around $60–$100 on a pair of shoes because I care more about comfort and durability than the price. I’m willing to pay more for shoes that last and feel comfortable to walk in.

제안: Give a clear preference and support it with one or two specific reasons. Use correct nouns (shoes), avoid contradictions (you said choose uncomfortable), and use linking words like “because” or “so.” Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk a lot and fashionable shoes can cause pain after a long time. For example, I choose sneakers or cushioned shoes that support my feet even if they are less trendy.

× Yes, I enjoy buying socks, but I do not buy shoes often. But whenever I buy a suit I always see a quality instead of quantity and I think usually buy a shoes once or twice in a year.

✓ Yes, I enjoy buying socks, but I do not buy shoes often. Whenever I buy a suit, I always choose quality over quantity, and I usually buy shoes once or twice a year.

Used incorrect quantifier phrases: 'see a quality instead of quantity' should be 'choose quality over quantity'. 'buy a shoes' uses wrong article and plural; 'a' should be removed. Also 'in a year' is better expressed as 'a year'. Suggestion: use 'quality over quantity' and correct articles and pluralization. Grammar problem type ID:14

× No, I prefer to buy a shoes from an physical store because you can check the fabric and quality instead of quantity and I think online can be a scam or they will they're not.

✓ No, I prefer to buy shoes from a physical store because you can check the fabric and quality, and I think online purchases can be a scam.

Incorrect use of the indefinite article 'a' before plural 'shoes' and wrong article 'an' before 'physical' should be 'a physical store'. The clause 'or they will they're not' is ungrammatical and redundant; simplify to 'can be a scam'. Suggestion: remove 'a' before plural nouns and use correct article before consonant sounds ('a physical'). Grammar problem type ID:22

× They can't provide a quality suit instead of their reels or the advertisements.

✓ They cannot provide the quality shown in their reels or advertisements.

Sentence structure is awkward and unclear: 'provide a quality suit instead of their reels' is incorrect. Use 'provide the quality shown in' to link actual product and promotional material. Suggest simplifying and making the object and comparison clear. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I always prefer to go and brought a suits from the physical stores which will be comfortable and.

✓ So I always prefer to go and buy suits from physical stores that will be comfortable.

Mixed tense and wrong verb form: 'prefer to go and brought' mixes present preference with past participle 'brought'; correct to base verb 'buy'. Also 'a suits' combines an article with plural; remove 'a'. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent and use plural without article when appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Whenever I buy a shoes I usually don't see a money.

✓ Whenever I buy shoes I usually don't worry about the price.

Incorrect articles: 'a shoes' and 'a money' are wrong ('shoes' is plural, 'money' is uncountable). The intended meaning likely 'don't look at cost' so rephrase to 'don't worry about the price'. Suggestion: avoid 'a' with uncountable nouns and plural count nouns. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I mean that I don't mind the quantity. I'm quality quantity because I just prefer the suits which are comfortable for me to wear and makes me comfortable to walk.

✓ I mean that I don't mind the quantity. I prefer quality because I just choose shoes that are comfortable to wear and help me walk easily.

Confusing repeated use of 'quantity' and misuse of 'I'm quality quantity'. Replace with 'I prefer quality'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'which are comfortable... and makes me' should be 'that are comfortable... and make it comfortable for me to walk' or simplified as above. Suggest using 'prefer quality' and ensure verbs agree with plural subjects. Grammar problem type ID:13

× So I usually see a quality instead of quantity whenever I buy a suit.

✓ So I usually choose quality instead of quantity whenever I buy shoes.

Wrong article 'a quality' and inconsistent nouns 'suit' vs 'shoes'. Use 'choose quality' and plural 'shoes' to match context. Suggest consistent vocabulary and omit unnecessary articles. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I prefer a comfortable suit because whenever we go, we should be comfortable to wear any kinds of things.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because whenever we go out, we should be comfortable wearing any kind of clothing.

Pronoun and noun choices: 'a comfortable suit' was likely intended 'comfortable shoes'. 'any kinds of things' is vague; use 'any kind of clothing'. Also 'comfortable to wear' should be 'comfortable wearing'. Suggest choose precise nouns and correct verb+gerund pattern. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I'll just like when it should be suited. Umm jeans paint or makes us comfortable whenever we walk for a long period of time.

✓ I just like it when things fit well. For example, jeans that fit make us comfortable when we walk for a long time.

Awkward verbs and wrong forms: 'I'll just like when it should be suited' is ungrammatical; use 'I just like it when things fit well'. 'Jeans paint' is incorrect (possibly 'jeans fit'); use 'jeans that fit'. Use '-ing' form properly after verbs like 'enjoy' or use relative clauses. Suggest use clear subject-verb-object and correct relative clauses. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So whenever you choose a fashionable suit, it may be pain in our legs and makes us uncomfortable to walk for a long period.

✓ So whenever you choose fashionable shoes, they may cause pain in your legs and make it uncomfortable to walk for a long time.

Word choice and agreement: 'a fashionable suit' should be 'fashionable shoes' in context. 'it may be pain in our legs' should be 'they may cause pain in your legs' and 'makes us uncomfortable' should be 'make it uncomfortable' or 'make you uncomfortable'. Ensure verb agreement with plural subject. Suggest use 'cause pain' and match subject and verb number. Grammar problem type ID:13

× So I choose uncomfortable suits.

✓ So I choose comfortable shoes.

Meaning contradicts earlier statements; 'uncomfortable suits' is wrong. Replace with 'comfortable shoes' to match intended preference. Also 'suits' vs 'shoes' confusion throughout; be consistent. Suggest review word choice to reflect intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:13