Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
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Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I really like buying shoes because this change makes me happier and more comfortable. I always buy one on pair of shoes every season of the year, so 5 or 4 times in a year.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes I have and the really frustrating experience with buying shoes online. When I booked 3 pairs of shoes which was very cheap so when they came to me the tissue was so bad and the sizes are smaller than my foot even when I bought.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend 2000 to $3000 a year on shoes. It's not too big amount of money but I see that shoes deserve be a high quality even when it is a little bit expensive.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I really prefer comfortable shoes, but it depends on my situation. If I have a big celebration, I would choose to have fashionable shoes. But in my normal days I'll wear comfortable shoes and I want to find the shoes which is both fashionable and comfortable.
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총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 70.0제안: Clarifiez et simplifiez la réponse : commencez par une phrase directe puis donnez la fréquence avec des mots précis. Corrigez les erreurs grammaticales (one pair, each season) et évitez les répétitions inutiles.
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes because new shoes make me feel more comfortable and cheerful. I usually buy one pair each season, so about four times a year.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 60.0제안: Organisez l'anecdote : donnez une phrase thème puis décrivez brièvement le problème en utilisant des connecteurs (for example, because, so). Corrigez le vocabulaire (tissue → material/quality, booked → ordered) et la grammaire (sizes were smaller).
예시: Yes, I have. For example, I once ordered three cheap pairs online, but when they arrived the quality of the material was poor and the sizes were smaller than advertised, so I had to return them.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Précisez la monnaie et corrigez la structure : commencez par le montant clair (in my currency or dollars). Ensuite expliquez la raison avec une connexion logique (because/so) et corrigez la grammaire (deserve to be, not too big an amount).
예시: I usually spend around $200 to $300 a year on shoes. I don't think it's a large amount because I prefer to buy high-quality shoes that last longer, even if they are slightly more expensive.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 80.0제안: Répondez d'abord clairement, puis donnez un contraste avec un mot de liaison (however/when). Évitez les répétitions et corrigez la formulation (I would choose fashionable shoes for special occasions).
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes for everyday wear. However, for special occasions like a big celebration, I would choose fashionable shoes; ideally, I look for a pair that is both stylish and comfortable.
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