Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が混乱している箇所（"shirt"と"shoes"の混同、文法的誤り）を直し、明確なトピックセンテンスと簡潔な補足を加えると良いです。具体的には主張（買う頻度）を最初に述べ、その後に理由（快適さを重視する）を一文で付け加え、単語の選択と語順に注意してください。また文は5文以内に収め、冗長な語（"how comfortable is it"のような語順の誤り）を避けて自然な表現を使いましょう。

예시: I don't buy shoes very often — usually about twice a year. I focus on comfort when I choose shoes because I walk a lot and want something that supports my feet. If a pair feels uncomfortable, I won't buy it even if it looks nice.

제안: 理由をはっきりした文で述べ、曖昧な表現（"umm"や語順の誤り）を避ける練習をしてください。具体的には"No"で始めた後、続く理由を1〜2文で整理し、"fit"や"fake pictures"など具体語を正しい語順で使うと説得力が増します。また、質問のフォローアップ（どうやって確認するか）を示すと会話が広がります。

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I worry that the pictures may be misleading. I prefer to try shoes on in a store to check the size and comfort, and if I buy online I would only do so from a trusted site with clear return policies.

제안: 金額の言い方が不明確なので、数字は明確な表現（例："about 5,100" か "around 5,000"）にし、文法（冠詞・複数形）を整えましょう。理由説明は簡潔にして接続詞（because, so, but）を適切に使い、比較や結果を明確に伝えてください。可能なら通貨単位も添えると良いです。

예시: I usually spend about 5,000 baht on a pair of shoes. I think this price lets me buy comfortable, well-fitting shoes, and although cheaper shoes are available, they are often lower in quality and less durable.

제안: "fitness shoes"より自然な表現は"comfortable shoes"や"sneakers"です。トピックセンテンスで好みを明確に示し、その後に理由を2文以内で述べてください。理由は具体的に（歩く頻度、用途）述べ、語順と冠詞に注意しましょう。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes, such as sneakers, because I walk a lot and need good support. I rarely attend formal events, so I value practicality over fashion when choosing footwear.

× I don't usually buy a shirt so normally I buy shoes twice a year.

✓ I don't usually buy shirts, so normally I buy shoes twice a year.

The plural form 'shirts' should be used after 'buy' when speaking generally about purchases; use plural for countable nouns in general statements. Also add a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general habits and punctuate compound sentences.'

× I always choose the shoes with how comfortable is it.

✓ I always choose shoes that are comfortable.

The original uses an incorrect word order and unnecessary 'the' and question structure embedded in a statement. Use a relative clause 'that are comfortable' to describe shoes. Suggestion: use 'that' + adjective to describe nouns.'

× No I never bought shoes on online because I'm scared of umm umm sometime online have a fake picture so I can try.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I'm afraid that sometimes online listings have fake pictures, so I cannot try them on.

Use present perfect 'have never bought' for life experiences up to now. 'Online' does not take 'on' here. 'I'm scared of' is better as 'I'm afraid that' and 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also change 'have' to 'have' with plural 'listings' or 'pictures' and add 'try them on' for clarity. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences and correct adverb forms and prepositions.'

× When I choose the shoes is it fit on my feet or?

✓ When I choose shoes, I check whether they fit my feet.

Original is an incorrect question tag and word order. Use 'check whether' or 'see if' plus present tense 'fit' to express the action. Remove unnecessary 'on' after 'fit'. Suggestion: rephrase as a statement explaining the checking action.'

× Approximately 5 100.

✓ Approximately 5,100.

Numbers should be written with a comma as a thousands separator in English. Also provide currency or unit if needed. Suggestion: write large numbers with commas and specify currency.'

× I think it's the best priced buy shoes because I can buy some comfortable and fit shoes but if it became more cheaper it's hard to choose a good shoes.

✓ I think it's the best price for buying shoes because I can buy comfortable, well-fitting shoes, but if they became cheaper, it's hard to find good shoes.

'Best priced' is awkward; use 'best price'. 'Buy shoes' needs 'for' or rephrase. Use adjectives 'comfortable' and 'well-fitting' and plural agreement 'shoes'. 'More cheaper' is ungrammatical; use 'cheaper'. Use 'find' instead of 'choose' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct adjective combinations and ensure plural agreement and comparative forms.'

× Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

✓ Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

This sentence is already correct. No grammatical change needed. Suggestion: none.'

× I definitely prefer a fitness shoes because I don't normally go to fashion show or special place that I need to wear fashion shoes and I also go for a walk a lot so I prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ I definitely prefer fitness shoes because I don't normally go to fashion shows or special places where I need to wear fashionable shoes, and I also go for walks a lot so I prefer comfortable shoes.

Use plural 'shoes' with 'fitness'. 'Fashion show' and 'special place' need plural forms in this general statement. Use 'where' to introduce the clause and 'fashionable' as the adjective. 'Go for walks' is idiomatic. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general habits and correct adjectives.'