Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「I want too many kinds of shoes to my clothes」は意味が不明瞭です。より自然な表現にするために、直接的に「I like buying shoes because I love fashion and want to match different shoes with my clothes」と言うと良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes because I love fashion, and I want to have different kinds of shoes to match my clothes.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。オンラインで靴を買わない理由を明確にし、文法的に正しい文章を作る必要があります。例えば、「I haven't bought shoes online because I'm worried about the size not fitting and I want to see the color in person」と言うと良いでしょう。

예시: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I'm worried that the size might not fit, and I prefer to see the color in person.

제안: 金額の表現が不自然で、文法的にも改善が必要です。例えば、「I usually spend about 16,000 yen on shoes」と言うと自然です。

예시: I usually spend about 16,000 yen on shoes.

제안: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。「shoes is very fashionable item」は誤りで、「shoes are a very fashionable item」が正しいです。また、理由を簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because they are an important part of my style, so I think it's better to choose fashion over comfort.

× I like wearing shoes because I love fashion, so I want too many kinds of shoes to my clothes.

✓ I like wearing shoes because I love fashion, so I want many kinds of shoes to match my clothes.

The phrase 'too many kinds of shoes to my clothes' is incorrect. 'Too many' implies an excessive amount, which may not be intended here. Also, 'to my clothes' is incorrect preposition usage; 'to match my clothes' is appropriate. The suggestion is to use 'many kinds of shoes to match my clothes' to express the desire for various shoes that go well with clothes.

× I like wearing shoes because I love fashion, so I want too many kinds of shoes to my clothes.

✓ I like wearing shoes because I love fashion, so I want many kinds of shoes to match my clothes.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express coordination or matching is 'to match' or 'that go with'. Therefore, 'to my clothes' should be corrected to 'to match my clothes'.

× No, I haven't because I worried about not 2 feet, my foot and shoes and I wanna see more Leo color.

✓ No, I haven't because I worry about my feet not matching the shoes, and I want to see more colors like Leo.

The sentence mixes past tense 'worried' with present perfect 'haven't'. Since the action is ongoing or habitual, present tense 'worry' is appropriate. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. The phrase 'not 2 feet, my foot and shoes' is unclear and likely means 'my feet not matching the shoes'. 'Leo color' likely refers to 'leopard color' or pattern, so 'more colors like Leo' is clearer.

× Maybe I spend money 16 thousands yen for my shoes.

✓ Maybe I spend about 16 thousand yen on my shoes.

'16 thousands yen' is incorrect; 'thousand' should be singular when used with a number. Also, 'spend money 16 thousands yen' is incorrect word order; the correct phrase is 'spend about 16 thousand yen on my shoes'.

× I prefer fashionable shoes because shoes is very fashionable item.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because shoes are a very fashionable item.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'item' is singular, so it should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× I prefer fashionable shoes because shoes is very fashionable item.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because shoes are a very fashionable item.

The noun 'item' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× So I think it is important for me to buy fashionable shoes better than comfortable shoes.

✓ So I think it is more important for me to buy fashionable shoes than comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'buy fashionable shoes better than comfortable shoes' is ungrammatical. The correct comparative structure is 'more important ... than ...'. The sentence should be restructured to express preference clearly.