Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
To be honest I used to like buying shoes but it was when I was a little girl. But now when I grow up I think that I don't like buying shoes anymore but when I have chance I would buy it when the other shoe is old.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, of course, because nowadays the social media is more increased, so I usually when I have free time, I usually scroll on the website and I there are so many types and different colors, so I can choose.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Actually, I'm I don't splurge on buying new shoes. When I when my shoes are still good, I I often want to use it one or two years. But when I have to buy a new shoes, I just want to spend about 500.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
Well, when I was a little girl I think I would choose fashionable shoes because it helped me feel more confident when I meet my friends. But nowadays when I grow up I think I will choose comfortable shoe because it have me feel happy and easy for work to school.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I used to enjoy buying shoes when I was a child, but now I only buy new ones when my old shoes are worn out.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời có nhiều từ thừa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy tập trung vào trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể.
예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are many styles and colors to choose from, and it's convenient to shop in my free time.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 55.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về đơn vị tiền tệ để câu trả lời rõ ràng.
예시: I usually don't spend a lot on shoes. I use them for one or two years, and when I buy new ones, I spend about 500,000 Vietnamese Dong.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng vẫn có lỗi ngữ pháp và một số từ không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng thì phù hợp và sửa lỗi số nhiều, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: When I was a child, I preferred fashionable shoes because they made me feel confident. However, now I choose comfortable shoes since they help me feel happy and make it easier to go to work or school.
문법
× To be honest I used to like buying shoes but it was when I was a little girl.
✓ To be honest, I used to like buying shoes when I was a little girl.
The phrase 'but it was when I was a little girl' is redundant and awkward. Removing 'but it was' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.
× But now when I grow up I think that I don't like buying shoes anymore but when I have chance I would buy it when the other shoe is old.
✓ But now that I have grown up, I think I don't like buying shoes anymore, but when I have a chance, I buy them when the other shoes are old.
The phrase 'when I grow up' should be in present perfect 'have grown up' to indicate completed action. 'I would buy it' is incorrect modal usage; 'I buy them' fits better. Also, 'the other shoe is old' should be plural 'shoes are old' to match plural subject.
× Yes, of course, because nowadays the social media is more increased, so I usually when I have free time, I usually scroll on the website and I there are so many types and different colors, so I can choose.
✓ Yes, of course, because nowadays social media has increased, so usually when I have free time, I scroll through websites where there are many types and different colors, so I can choose.
'The social media is more increased' is incorrect; 'social media has increased' is correct. 'Scroll on the website' should be 'scroll through websites'. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× Actually, I'm I don't splurge on buying new shoes. When I when my shoes are still good, I I often want to use it one or two years.
✓ Actually, I don't splurge on buying new shoes. When my shoes are still good, I often want to use them for one or two years.
'I often want to use it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'use them'. Also, 'I'm' is unnecessary here.
× But when I have to buy a new shoes, I just want to spend about 500.
✓ But when I have to buy new shoes, I just want to spend about 500.
'A new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; remove 'a' to correct the phrase.
× Well, when I was a little girl I think I would choose fashionable shoes because it helped me feel more confident when I meet my friends.
✓ Well, when I was a little girl, I think I would choose fashionable shoes because they helped me feel more confident when I met my friends.
'It helped me' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; use 'they helped me'. Also, 'when I meet' should be past tense 'when I met' to match past context.
× But nowadays when I grow up I think I will choose comfortable shoe because it have me feel happy and easy for work to school.
✓ But nowadays, since I have grown up, I think I will choose comfortable shoes because they make me feel happy and make it easy to go to work or school.
'Comfortable shoe' should be plural 'comfortable shoes'. 'It have me feel' is incorrect; use 'they make me feel'. Also, 'easy for work to school' is awkward; corrected to 'make it easy to go to work or school'.
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