Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như lặp từ "to" và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books, especially academic ones related to my major, which helps me with my studies.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như chia động từ cho đúng (offer -> offers), và dùng từ phù hợp (revising -> review). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Usually, I study with my friends in the library because it offers a quiet place where I can review the lessons I learned during the day.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không tự nhiên, ví dụ như "to for me to read books". Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Actually, no. My parents didn't have much time to take me to the library when I was a kid, so I rarely went there.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ không chính xác như "it's depend", "where whereas" gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên dùng cấu trúc đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ thừa để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: I think it depends on whether their parents have enough time to take them to the library or not.

× Most of the time I go to the library is studying with my friends because the library often offer quiet place for me to revising the lessons that I have study in the day.

✓ Most of the time I go to the library to study with my friends because the library often offers a quiet place for me to revise the lessons that I have studied during the day.

The phrase 'is studying' is incorrect here; the verb after 'go to the library' should be in the infinitive form 'to study' to express purpose. 'Offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'library'. 'Revising' should be 'revise' to match the infinitive form after 'for me to'. 'Have study' should be 'have studied' to use the correct present perfect tense. 'In the day' is better expressed as 'during the day' for natural English usage.

× I want to borrow some books from there to to read or I need some academic books that related to my major that I study.

✓ I want to borrow some books from there to read or I need some academic books that are related to my major that I study.

The phrase 'that related to' is missing the verb 'are' to form the relative clause correctly. Also, the repeated 'to to' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'to'.

× the library often offer quiet place for me to revising the lessons that I have study in the day.

✓ the library often offers a quiet place for me to revise the lessons that I have studied during the day.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'offers' not 'offer'. Also, 'quiet place' needs the article 'a'. 'Revising' should be 'revise' to match the infinitive form after 'for me to'. 'Have study' should be 'have studied' to use the correct present perfect tense. 'In the day' is better expressed as 'during the day'.

× Actually no, because my parents don't have much time to take me to the library as a way to for me to read books.

✓ Actually no, because my parents don't have much time to take me to the library as a way for me to read books.

The phrase 'to for me to' is incorrect; it should be 'for me to' to correctly express purpose. The modal verb usage is not directly involved here, but the prepositional phrase needs correction.

× I think it's depend on the situations where whereas their parents have enough time or not to take them to the library.

✓ I think it depends on the situation whether their parents have enough time or not to take them to the library.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. 'Situations' should be singular 'situation' to match the context. 'Where whereas' is redundant; 'whether' is the correct conjunction here. 'Their' is correct referring to 'Chinese kids'.