Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In your answer, try to speak clearly and directly about your library visits. Avoid unclear phrases like "when it was key" and "so many kind of pub." Use simple, correct sentences and focus on your experience. For example, say when and why you go to the library, and how it makes you feel. Keep your answer natural and easy to understand.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it has many books and a quiet place to study. I usually go there with my friend Will, and we enjoy reading and learning together. It makes me feel happy and focused.

제안: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like "and" or "because" to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. For example, explain what activities you do in the library and how they help you improve your English.

예시: In the library, I usually read books with my friends. We focus on studying and ask each other questions to improve our English. The library is a great educational resource for children and students.

제안: Make your answer more direct and clear. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add reasons or details. Avoid confusing negatives like "not only for children, it's not for adult." Use simple sentences to explain your experience as a child.

예시: When I was a kid, I found the library very interesting because it has many books for children. However, I did not go there often because I usually went home early.

제안: Answer the question clearly and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, say what you know or think about Chinese kids going to the library, and explain why libraries are good for children. Try to finish your sentences completely.

예시: I am not sure because I live in Cambodia, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library to improve their reading skills. The library is a great place for children to learn and gain knowledge.

× Yes, I often go to the library when it was key because there's so many kind of pub there and there's the results of education and yeah, I feel so good when I'm being in the library with my friend Will.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library when I was a kid because there are so many kinds of books there and there are educational resources and yeah, I feel so good when I'm in the library with my friend Will.

The phrase 'when it was key' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a kid' to indicate past time. 'There's so many kind of pub' has multiple errors: 'there's' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'kinds', 'kind' should be plural 'kinds', and 'pub' is incorrect in context, likely meant 'books'. 'There's the results of education' should be 'there are educational resources' for correct plural and meaning. 'I'm being in the library' is incorrect; 'I'm in the library' is correct. These corrections fix past tense usage, plural agreement, and word choice.

× Yes, I often go to the library when it was key because there's so many kind of pub there and there's the results of education and yeah, I feel so good when I'm being in the library with my friend Will.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library when I was a kid because there are so many kinds of books there and there are educational resources and yeah, I feel so good when I'm in the library with my friend Will.

The phrase 'there's so many kind of pub' contains singular verb 'there's' with plural noun 'many kind'. It should be 'there are so many kinds' to match plural form. Also, 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' and 'pub' is likely a mistake for 'books'. Similarly, 'there's the results' uses singular 'there's' with plural 'results'; it should be 'there are the results' or better 'there are educational resources'. These corrections address singular/plural agreement errors.

× Hang on. We're chilling and we was doing great that time.

✓ Hang on. We were chilling and we were doing great at that time.

The phrase 'we was doing' is incorrect because 'was' is singular past tense. For plural subject 'we', the correct past tense verb is 'were'. Also, 'that time' is better expressed as 'at that time' to indicate a specific past moment.

× In the library there is nothing beside reading a book with my friends.

✓ In the library, there is nothing besides reading a book with my friends.

The phrase 'beside reading' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'besides reading' meaning 'except for'. Also, a comma after 'In the library' improves clarity. This corrects the preposition and sentence structure.

× Here Linus, we can focus studying in the library with my friend and ask each other and question each other to them to improve their English.

✓ Here in Linus, we can focus on studying in the library with my friend and ask each other questions to improve our English.

The phrase 'focus studying' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on studying' because 'focus' requires the preposition 'on'. 'Ask each other and question each other to them' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'ask each other questions'. Also, 'to them' is unnecessary and confusing. 'Improve their English' should be 'improve our English' to match the subject. These corrections fix preposition use and pronoun reference.

× You know in the in the library is educational resource for children.

✓ You know, the library is an educational resource for children.

The phrase 'in the in the library is educational resource' is incorrect. It should be 'the library is an educational resource' to correctly use the definite article and sentence structure. 'Educational resource' needs the article 'an' because it is singular countable noun.

× I thought the library is very interesting for children.

✓ I think the library is very interesting for children.

The sentence uses past tense 'I thought' but the statement is a general truth, so present tense 'I think' is more appropriate. This aligns tense with the meaning.

× It's not only for children, it's not for adult.

✓ It's not only for children, it's not for adults.

The word 'adult' should be plural 'adults' to match the plural 'children'. This corrects pronoun and noun number agreement.

× But when I was a kid, I didn't often go it many times because I always go home early.

✓ But when I was a kid, I didn't often go there many times because I always went home early.

The phrase 'go it many times' is incorrect; 'go there many times' is correct. Also, 'I always go home early' should be past tense 'I always went home early' to match the past time frame. These corrections fix past tense and pronoun use.

× In this case I don't know because I'm living in Cambria, but but Chinese kid may go to the library to improve their reading and this is the best place for children.

✓ In this case, I don't know because I'm living in Cambria, but Chinese kids may go to the library to improve their reading and this is the best place for children.

The phrase 'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to agree with 'may go' and 'their reading'. This corrects singular/plural agreement.