Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear, especially the phrase 'biblical kind of person' which seems out of context. Try to be more direct and concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it offers a quiet environment and a wide range of books that I enjoy reading.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'biblical kind of person' and 'helps me provide to true knowledge'. Try to use correct grammar and be specific about your activities. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Usually, I read books on subjects like history, mathematics, and geography in the library because they help me gain knowledge that I cannot easily find online.

제안: Your answer is understandable but the word 'hopefully' is incorrectly used here. Be confident and use past tense correctly. Add linking words to improve flow.

예시: Yes, when I was a child, I often visited the library at my school because it had a large collection of books.

제안: Your answer is too short and does not address the question. Try to give an opinion or general observation, and support it with reasons or examples. Use polite and formal language.

예시: I believe many Chinese kids do go to the library regularly because it helps them with their studies and broadens their knowledge.

× Oftenly I read the books there as a biblical kind of person and like to read the books such as history and mathematics, geography and it helps me to explore my knowledge.

✓ I often read books there as a biblical kind of person and like to read books such as history, mathematics, and geography, and it helps me to explore my knowledge.

The adverb 'Oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. Also, the adverb should be placed before the main verb 'read' for proper sentence structure. Additionally, 'the books' is unnecessarily definite; 'books' is more appropriate here. Commas are needed to separate items in a list for clarity.

× It helps me provide to true knowledge which I cannot find offline.

✓ It helps me gain true knowledge which I cannot find offline.

The phrase 'helps me provide to true knowledge' is incorrect. The verb 'help' should be followed by the base verb 'gain' or 'obtain' without 'to'. Also, 'provide to' is not correct; 'gain' or 'obtain' is appropriate here.

× Well, in my childhood, hopefully I went to the library.

✓ Well, in my childhood, I used to go to the library.

The use of 'hopefully' is incorrect here as it expresses hope or wish, which does not fit the past habitual action. 'Used to' is the correct modal expression to indicate past habitual actions.