Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. For example, use 'the library' instead of 'library' alone, and avoid repeating 'peaceful environment' twice. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, definitely. I often go to the library because it provides a peaceful and quiet environment where I can concentrate easily. Especially during exams, I prefer studying there to avoid distractions and focus better.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. For example, use 'I prefer reading' instead of 'I give more preference to reading', and connect the list of personalities smoothly. Also, 'motivates' should be 'motivate' to agree with plural subject.

예시: I prefer reading autobiographies of famous personalities such as Neeraj Chopra, Milkha Singh, Helen Keller, and Usain Bolt because their sacrifices motivate me to take on challenging tasks in my life.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains redundancy and awkward phrasing. Avoid repeating 'when you were a kid' and 'when I was a child'. Also, use 'preferred' instead of 'gave more preference to' and improve sentence flow with linking words.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library as a child. Back then, I preferred reading story books because they were the best way to sharpen my mind and imagination.

제안: Your answer has good content but needs grammatical corrections and better coherence. Use plural form 'kids' consistently, correct articles ('a highly valued' to 'highly valued'), and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, replace 'destruction' with 'distraction'.

예시: Yes, certainly. Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in their culture. Moreover, during exams, they prefer visiting the library to find a peaceful environment where they can concentrate without any distractions.

× I often go to the library because library is a place that provides me a peaceful and quiet environment to easily concentrate on my study.

✓ I often go to the library because the library is a place that provides me a peaceful and quiet environment to easily concentrate on my study.

In English, when referring to a specific place that is known or has been mentioned, the definite article 'the' is required before the noun 'library'. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect. Always use 'the' before singular, specific nouns like 'library' in this context.

× I usually go to the library during my exam because at that time I need peaceful environment to study without any distraction.

✓ I usually go to the library during my exam because at that time I need a peaceful environment to study without any distraction.

The phrase 'peaceful environment' requires an article before it. Since 'environment' is a singular countable noun, it needs the indefinite article 'a' here. Omitting the article makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× Their sacrifices motivates me to do challenging works in my life.

✓ Their sacrifices motivate me to do challenging work in my life.

The subject 'Their sacrifices' is plural, so the verb should be 'motivate' (plural form) not 'motivates'. Also, 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or effort, so it should be singular without 's'.

× When you were a kid, yes.

✓ When I was a kid, yes.

The question is about the student's own experience, so the pronoun should be 'I' not 'you'. Using 'you' here is incorrect as it changes the meaning and does not answer the question properly.

× At that time, I gave more preference to reading story books because being a child, that was best way to sharpen my mind with story books.

✓ At that time, I gave more preference to reading story books because, being a child, that was the best way to sharpen my mind with story books.

The phrase 'best way' requires the definite article 'the' before 'best' because it is a superlative adjective. Omitting 'the' before superlatives is grammatically incorrect.

× Yes, certainly Chinese kids often go to the library because education is a highly valued in their culture and the Chinese kid gave more preference to visit the library during their exam because that time they need peaceful environment to concentrate on their study without any destruction.

✓ Yes, certainly Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in their culture and the Chinese kids give more preference to visiting the library during their exams because at that time they need a peaceful environment to concentrate on their studies without any distraction.

Several errors here: 'the Chinese kid' should be plural 'the Chinese kids' to agree with 'kids'; 'gave' should be present tense 'give' to match 'often go'; 'to visit' should be 'to visiting' after 'preference'; 'exam' should be plural 'exams' to match 'kids'; 'that time' should be 'at that time'; 'peaceful environment' needs article 'a'; 'study' should be plural 'studies'; 'destruction' is incorrect, the correct word is 'distraction'.