Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I rarely go to the library since graduating because I find online resources more convenient and time-saving, especially with my busy schedule.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas and check your grammar, especially verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

예시: When I was a student, I usually went to the library to borrow books for my studies and to read quietly because it is a peaceful environment. I also used the library to work on my assignments.

제안: Your answer has good content but some sentences are incomplete or grammatically incorrect. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repeating 'talked about' and try to use varied vocabulary.

예시: Yes, definitely. When I was a kid, I often went to the library with my friends. We read children's books and shared our favorite parts of the stories. We also enjoyed reading comic books because they were fun and interesting.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, provide more specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I have heard that many Chinese kids often go to the library, and there are usually long queues. This is because the Chinese education system is very strict, so students need to study harder than others.

× I prefer using online resources and tools that help me a lot of time and are more convenient, especially since I have a busy schedule.

✓ I prefer using online resources and tools that save me a lot of time and are more convenient, especially since I have a busy schedule.

The phrase 'help me a lot of time' is incorrect because 'help' is not typically followed directly by a time expression. The correct verb here is 'save' to indicate that the resources reduce the amount of time needed. So, 'save me a lot of time' is the proper expression.

× Sometimes I use the library to do study my assignments.

✓ Sometimes I use the library to study my assignments.

The phrase 'do study' is incorrect because 'do' is unnecessary before 'study' in this context. The verb 'study' alone correctly expresses the action. Therefore, 'to study my assignments' is the correct form.

× Also enjoying reading comic books because they are fun and interesting.

✓ I also enjoy reading comic books because they are fun and interesting.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'I also enjoy' provides the necessary subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× I heard like that there is very long queue in front of the library in China.

✓ I heard that there is a very long queue in front of the library in China.

The phrase 'heard like that' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'heard that'. Also, 'very long queue' needs the article 'a' before it. These corrections improve the sentence's grammatical accuracy.

× So Chinese education system is so directly strictly for them, they should study more than others.

✓ So the Chinese education system is very strict, and students have to study more than others.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect adverb placement ('so directly strictly'). Replacing it with 'very strict' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.