Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp lại từ "because". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library since I am very interested in reading. Moreover, there are many different types of books available, which helps me avoid getting bored. For example, last week I found a fascinating novel that I couldn't put down. I especially enjoy spending time there because it is quiet and comfortable.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và câu trả lời nên được cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "borrow them" thành "borrow". Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: I usually go to the library to search for books that I can borrow. Besides that, I also use the quiet environment there to concentrate on my homework. For instance, last week I spent several hours there preparing for an important exam.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có những phần không phù hợp như "blah blah blah". Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không trang trọng và cải thiện ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "like" nên là "likes". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid. My brother, who also likes reading, often took me with him to the library. We would read books together and sometimes I watched him do his homework there.

제안: Bạn nên tránh nói những câu không chắc chắn hoặc lặp lại như "I cannot I can tell clearly" và tránh các phần không liên quan như "Have a read, Poppy." Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

예시: That's an interesting question. Although I'm not Chinese, I believe that many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to read and study. Libraries provide a good environment for learning.

× Umm, sometime I go to the library because I want to search for some books that I can borrow them.

✓ Umm, sometimes I go to the library because I want to search for some books that I can borrow.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). Also, 'that I can borrow them' is redundant; 'them' should be omitted because 'that' already refers to the books.

× Umm but sometime I go to the library for homework or something.

✓ Umm, but sometimes I go to the library for homework or something.

Again, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to correctly express frequency.

× Need to concentrate that in the library is quiet.

✓ I need to concentrate, and the library is quiet.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'I' as the subject and connecting the ideas with 'and' makes the sentence complete and clear.

× I have a brother who like to read like me so when I was a kid he usually brought me to library with him to read some books and watch him do homework or blah blah blah.

✓ I have a brother who likes to read like me, so when I was a kid he usually brought me to the library with him to read some books and watch him do homework or blah blah blah.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'brother'. Also, 'to library' should be 'to the library' to include the definite article.

× he usually brought me to library with him to read some books

✓ he usually brought me to the library with him to read some books

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× but I think Chinese kids also often go to library because their parents want them to learn to read.

✓ but I think Chinese kids also often go to the library because their parents want them to learn to read.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place.

× Have a read, Poppy.

✓ (This sentence is unclear and seems out of context; it should be omitted or clarified.)

The phrase 'Have a read, Poppy.' is unclear and does not fit the context. It may be a misstatement or incomplete sentence.