Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to improve your grammar and sentence structure for clarity. For example, say "I find it easier to concentrate there compared to noisy places" and "The library has many useful books and resources." Also, avoid small errors like 'have' instead of 'has'.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my studies. I find it easier to concentrate there compared to noisy places. Also, the library has many useful books and resources that help me with my learning.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to give a clear and complete answer. Even a short answer should directly respond to the question with some details. For example, say what activities you do in the library like reading, studying, or using computers.

예시: Usually, I read books and study in the library. Sometimes, I use the computers there to do my homework.

제안: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. For example, say "I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I did not have many friends." Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I did not have many friends to play with.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to give a full sentence with clear reasons. For example, say "Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they like reading and studying." Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they like reading and studying.

× I find it easily to concentrate there compared to other noise place.

✓ I find it easy to concentrate there compared to other noisy places.

The word 'easily' is an adverb but the sentence requires an adjective 'easy' to describe 'it'. Also, 'noise place' is incorrect; it should be 'noisy places' to correctly describe places with noise and to use plural form for comparison.

× Also the library have many useful books on and resource that help me with my learning.

✓ Also, the library has many useful books and resources that help me with my learning.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources' to match 'many' and to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I usually I used to go to the library when I was a kid because they are because I don't have any friends.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't have any friends.

The sentence has redundant and confusing parts like 'I usually I' and 'because they are because'. Also, 'don't' should be past tense 'didn't' to match the past context.