Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to give a complete sentence and add a reason or frequency to make it more natural and effective. For example, you can say how often you go and why.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books and studying in a quiet environment.

제안: Your answer has some good points but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Also, avoid repeating words and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Usually, I take a book from the shelf and read quietly so I don't disturb others. After finishing one book, I often choose another to continue reading.

제안: Your answer has some good ideas but it is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid because I loved reading. There were many kinds of books, and I usually invited my friends to join me.

제안: Your answer does not directly address the question and sounds informal. Try to give your opinion or explain why you don't know, and avoid suggesting the examiner to search elsewhere.

예시: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Cambodia. However, I think many children enjoy reading and visit libraries when possible.

× Yes exactly, I already take the book out of the shelf and try to read quietly and don't annoy everyone.

✓ Yes exactly, I have already taken the book out of the shelf and try to read quietly and not annoy everyone.

The verb 'take' should be in the past participle form 'taken' after 'have already' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'don't annoy' should be 'not annoy' to correctly express intention.

× Yes, until I done reading and I pick another book to read more.

✓ Yes, until I have done reading and I pick another book to read more.

The verb 'done' needs an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense 'have done'. This indicates the completion of reading before picking another book.

× because there is many kind of book in there of there

✓ because there are many kinds of books there

'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'many kinds of books'. Also, 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' and 'book' should be plural 'books'. The phrase 'in there of there' is incorrect and simplified to 'there'.

× I usually invite my friend to go there too because yes, all, all of my friends.

✓ I usually invite my friends to go there too because, yes, all of my friends

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'all of my friends'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical agreement.

× In this case I I don't know at all because I am living in Cambodia.

✓ In this case, I don't know at all because I am living in Cambodia.

The repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed for correct sentence structure.

× Yeah, but you want. But if you want more detail you can go to check in Google or search more about their culture.

✓ Yeah, but if you want more details, you can check on Google or search more about their culture.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the parts and correcting 'go to check in Google' to 'check on Google' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.