Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşunu və söz seçimini təkmilləşdirmək lazımdır. Məsələn, "I go to the library once a week because transportation takes a lot of time, so I prefer studying at home and don't visit the library often." kimi daha təbii və qısa ifadələr istifadə edin.

예시: I usually go to the library once a week because it takes a long time to get there. Therefore, I prefer to study at home most of the time.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha axıcı etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, "In the library, I usually take IELTS practice tests and also prepare for my final exams."

예시: In the library, I usually take IELTS practice tests and also prepare for my final exams to improve my skills.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və təbii etmək üçün qrammatikaya diqqət yetirin və əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edin. Məsələn, "Yes, definitely. My sister used to take me to the library to read and borrow books. We also had a community where we read one book per week and discussed it together."

예시: Yes, definitely. My sister used to take me to the library to read and borrow books. Additionally, we had a community where we read one book each week and discussed it together.

제안: Cümlənizi daha qısa və aydın etmək üçün lazımsız sözləri çıxarın və əlaqələndirici ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they study hard and have difficult exams."

예시: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they study hard and have challenging exams to prepare for.

× I I go to the library once in a week since the transportation takes a lot of time, so I try to spend my time studying at home and I don't go to libraries that much.

✓ I go to the library once a week since the transportation takes a lot of time, so I try to spend my time studying at home and I don't go to libraries that much.

The phrase 'once in a week' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'once a week'. This is a common singular and plural issue where the prepositional phrase should be simplified to 'a week' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, definitely. I remember my sister took me to library to read books and take them home and even we have a community where we read one book in a week and discuss it there.

✓ Yes, definitely. I remember my sister took me to the library to read books and take them home and even we have a community where we read one book a week and discuss it there.

The phrase 'took me to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'in a week' should be 'a week' to correctly express frequency. These are errors in the use of prepositions and articles.

× I think yes, because in on the Internet I see a lot of Chinese students that they study too much and their exams are hard too, so I think it's normal for them to study more.

✓ I think yes, because on the Internet I see a lot of Chinese students who study a lot and their exams are hard too, so I think it's normal for them to study more.

The phrase 'in on the Internet' is incorrect; only 'on the Internet' is needed. Also, 'that they study' should be 'who study' to correctly refer to people. These are errors in preposition use and relative pronoun choice.