Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋唔夠流暢，建議你用完整句子同埋避免重複，例如可以講清楚去圖書館嘅目的同埋活動。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library before my exams to practice and review my notes because it provides a quiet environment for studying.

제안: 你嘅答案有啲重複同埋語法錯誤，建議你用連接詞令句子更流暢，並且具體描述你喺圖書館做啲乜嘢。

예시: Usually, I practice exam questions and sometimes bring books and my computer because I find the library environment very conducive to studying.

제안: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤同埋表達唔清楚，建議你用正確嘅時態同埋清晰嘅句子結構，並且避免不必要嘅重複。

예시: Yes, I often went to the library with my mother when I was a child, especially when we both had free time.

제안: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤同埋句子結構唔夠清晰，建議你用連接詞令句子更連貫，並且用正確嘅複數形式。

예시: I think not only Chinese children but also kids from other countries often go to the library. It usually depends on their parents, as many encourage their children to read and visit the library regularly.

× Yes, I often go to the library for the before my exam and I will do some practice and in the library.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library before my exam and I will do some practice in the library.

句子中 'for the before my exam' 使用了多餘的定冠詞 'the'，正確用法是 'before my exam'，因為 'before' 已經表達了時間關係，不需要 'for the'。此外，'and in the library' 位置不當，應該放在 'do some practice' 之後。

× I always do the practice and do some exam in library.

✓ I always do practice and take some exams in the library.

'the practice' 不需要定冠詞，因為 'practice' 是不可數名詞。'do some exam' 應改為 'take some exams'，因為 'exam' 是可數名詞，且考試通常用 'take' 動詞。

× Sometime I will bring the books and bring the computer in the library because I think the environment of art library is better for studying.

✓ Sometimes I will bring books and bring my computer to the library because I think the environment of the art library is better for studying.

'Sometime' 應為 'Sometimes' 表示頻率。'bring the books' 改為 'bring books'，因為不是特定的書。'bring the computer' 改為 'bring my computer'，更自然。'in the library' 改為 'to the library'，表示動作方向。'environment of art library' 前加定冠詞 'the'。

× Yes, I always went to the library when I was kids and I went to library with my mom and when I feel free and my mother feel free they ** *** will take me to the library.

✓ Yes, I always went to the library when I was a kid and I went to the library with my mom and when I felt free and my mother felt free they would take me to the library.

'kids' 應為單數 'a kid'，因為主語是 'I'。'went to library' 應為 'went to the library'，加定冠詞。'feel' 應為過去式 'felt'，因為描述過去。'they ** *** will take' 應改為 'they would take'，表示過去習慣。

× I think not only the Chinese kid often go to the library and I think there are many children from different countries often go to the library.

✓ I think not only Chinese kids often go to the library but also many children from different countries often go to the library.

'the Chinese kid' 應為複數 'Chinese kids'，因為指一般情況。'often go' 主詞為複數，動詞正確。

× It always depends on the parent. Many parent encourage them to go to library and reading both these.

✓ It always depends on the parents. Many parents encourage them to go to the library and read both.

'parent' 應為複數 'parents'。'go to library' 應為 'go to the library'。'reading both these' 不通順，改為 'read both'，更自然。