Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library because I like reading books. There is a library near my house, so it is convenient for me to visit."

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. There is a library near my house, so it is very convenient for me to visit regularly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words. For example, "In the library, I usually read novels, magazines, and poems because I enjoy literature. Also, the quiet environment helps me relax."

예시: In the library, I usually read novels, magazines, and poems because I enjoy literature. Also, the quiet environment helps me relax and focus on my reading.

제안: Your answer has some good points but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, "Yes, I went to the library every weekend with my family. I usually picked five books to read at home."

예시: Yes, I went to the library every weekend with my family. I usually picked five books to take home and read during the week.

제안: Your answer is mostly unclear and contains unrelated words. Try to directly answer the question with clear and simple sentences. For example, "In my opinion, many Chinese kids do not often go to the library because they are busy with schoolwork and other activities."

예시: In my opinion, many Chinese kids do not often go to the library because they are busy with schoolwork and other activities. However, some children visit libraries to study or read for fun.

× Yes, I'm go to the library much.

✓ Yes, I go to the library often.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm go' which is not a valid present tense form. The correct simple present tense for habitual actions is 'I go'. Also, 'much' is not typically used with 'go' in this context; 'often' is more appropriate.

× Be I like reading a book and.

✓ Because I like reading books.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Be I like reading a book and.' does not form a proper sentence. The corrected sentence uses 'Because' to explain the reason and corrects the noun to plural 'books' for general reading.

× Near and libraries near my to buy my house.

✓ There are libraries near my house.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and misuses prepositions. The correct expression is 'libraries near my house' and to indicate existence, 'There are' is used.

× Taking a break in library for reading novels and magazines and poems act because I like reading a book and I like poems and library is quiet place for relaxing or I'm.

✓ I take a break in the library to read novels, magazines, and poems because I like reading. The library is a quiet place for relaxing.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. The correction provides complete sentences with proper verb forms and articles.

× Yes, I went to library every weekends with my family.

✓ Yes, I went to the library every weekend with my family.

The original sentence misses the article 'the' before 'library' and incorrectly uses 'weekends' in plural with 'every'. 'Every' should be followed by a singular noun, so 'weekend' is correct.

× When I went to when I go to library, pick five books by me and reading a book.

✓ When I went to the library, I picked five books and read them.

The original sentence is confusing and mixes tenses. The correction uses past tense consistently and proper sentence structure.