Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. For example, say "I frequently visit the library" instead of "visit library." Also, avoid redundancy like "which is also good for my health as well." Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I frequently visit the library. Whenever I feel down, I go there because it is peaceful, and I can read many interesting books. Moreover, gaining new knowledge helps me feel refreshed and improves my mental health.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. For example, "novels which has tourist" is unclear. Try to be specific and use correct grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

예시: I usually read novels in the library, especially romantic ones or other genres with interesting twists. I find these stories very engaging, and sometimes it feels like watching a movie in real life.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some errors like "when I was youngster" (should be "a youngster") and "bookstore" instead of "library." Also, avoid repeating "used to" too much. Use linking words to improve flow.

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was a youngster. I often visited the school or college library, and it was fun. I still remember spending time there with my friends, enjoying different books.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid repeating words like "Chinese Chinese" and incomplete sentences like "I find them very curious and. Ready to learn anything from books?" Try to give a complete, coherent answer with linking words and specific details.

예시: I think Chinese youngsters often go to the library because they are eager to learn. They are very curious and like to gain knowledge from books, which helps them in their studies and personal growth.

× Yes, I frequently visit library.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Whenever I feel bad, I go to Public Library because I find it peaceful and I can read a lot of things.

✓ Whenever I feel bad, I go to the Public Library because I find it peaceful and I can read a lot of things.

The phrase 'Public Library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before 'Public Library' is incorrect.

× I love getting knowledge about new things which is also good for my health as well.

✓ I love gaining knowledge about new things, which is also good for my health.

The word 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and does not use 'getting' commonly; 'gaining knowledge' is more appropriate. Also, 'which is also good for my health as well' is redundant; 'also' and 'as well' mean the same, so one should be removed for clarity.

× I generally go to the Public Library to read the novels, romantic novels or sometimes some other genre of novels I find twist.

✓ I generally go to the Public Library to read novels, romantic novels, or sometimes other genres of novels that I find twisty.

The definite article 'the' before 'novels' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also, 'some other genre of novels' should be plural 'genres' to match 'novels'. The phrase 'I find twist' is incomplete and unclear; 'that I find twisty' or 'with twists' is better.

× I find novels which has tourist very interesting and I feel like I am watching some movies in real life.

✓ I find novels which have twists very interesting, and I feel like I am watching some movies in real life.

The subject 'novels' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Also, 'tourist' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'twists'.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was youngster.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a youngster.

The noun 'youngster' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting 'a' is incorrect.

× I used to visit the bookstore of my school or colleges.

✓ I used to visit the bookstore of my school or college.

The phrase 'school or colleges' mixes singular and plural; it should be consistent. Since 'school' is singular, 'college' should also be singular.

× I still remember the day I used to spend there with my friends enjoying the books.

✓ I still remember the days I used to spend there with my friends enjoying the books.

The phrase 'the day' conflicts with 'used to spend' which implies multiple occasions; 'the days' is more appropriate.

× I think Chinese Chinese youngsters regularly go to the library because they seek knowledge in every step.

✓ I think Chinese youngsters regularly go to the library because they seek knowledge at every step.

The word 'Chinese' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'at' in the phrase 'at every step'.

× I find them very curious and. Ready to learn anything from books?

✓ I find them very curious and ready to learn anything from books.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. The period after 'and' should be removed and the question mark replaced with a period to form a complete sentence.