Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'I am.' 부분은 불필요하며, 'busy to go to library' 대신 'too busy to go to the library'라고 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하세요.

예시: Actually, I don't go to the library often because I go to college every day and I'm usually too busy to visit the library.

제안: 답변이 다소 반복적이고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 'study my English skill' 대신 'practice my English skills'라고 하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

예시: I usually practice my English skills in the library, and I also study for my exams because it is a quiet place where I can focus well.

제안: 문장이 길고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 'book books'는 잘못된 표현이며, 'books that I was interested in'으로 수정하세요. 문장을 두 개로 나누어 명확하게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I usually read books at home. My mom bought all the books that I was interested in.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 'I don't chance'는 의미가 불분명하며, 솔직하게 모른다는 표현을 간결하게 하세요.

예시: Actually, I don't know because I am Korean and I haven't had the chance to learn about that.

× Actually, I don't go to the library often because I am.

✓ Actually, I don't go to the library often because I am busy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate after 'I am'. To make it grammatically correct, a complement such as 'busy' is needed to complete the sentence structure.

× I think I'm busy to go to library.

✓ I think I'm too busy to go to the library.

The phrase 'busy to go' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'too busy to go'. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I usually study my English skill in the library and also I study for my exam.

✓ I usually study my English skills in the library, and I also study for my exams.

'English skill' should be pluralized to 'English skills' to refer to multiple abilities. Also, 'exam' should be pluralized to 'exams' if referring to multiple tests. The sentence is improved by adding a comma and adjusting word order for clarity.

× That is a good place to focus on my study.

✓ That is a good place to focus on my studies.

The word 'study' in this context should be pluralized to 'studies' to refer to the general activity of studying. Also, 'focus on my studies' is the correct collocation.

× I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I usually read my book books in my house because my mom bought all books which I interested in.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I usually read my books at home since my mom bought all the books I was interested in.

'Book books' is redundant; 'books' is sufficient. 'In my house' is better expressed as 'at home'. 'All books which I interested in' should be 'all the books I was interested in' to correct tense and article usage.

× Actually I don't know that answer because I I've never heard about the the issue because I I'm Korean and I don't chance.

✓ Actually, I don't know the answer because I've never heard about the issue since I'm Korean and I don't have the chance.

'Know that answer' should be 'know the answer'. 'Heard about the the issue' has a repeated article and should be 'heard about the issue'. 'I don't chance' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have the chance' or 'I haven't had the chance'.