Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid filler words like 'umm' and repeated phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library in my hometown. Whenever I have free time, I like to spend it there because it provides a peaceful environment. Moreover, it helps me focus better on my studies and reading.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid filler words and organize your answer with linking words for clarity.

예시: In the library, I usually read books and listen to podcasts or educational lessons on my mobile phone using AirPods. This way, I can focus without disturbing others.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating similar ideas. Adding linking words will improve coherence.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I found it boring. Instead, I preferred playing with my friends and spending time with my family after school.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid hesitation sounds. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because they are usually very dedicated to their studies and enjoy reading books.

× Is I often go to library.

✓ I often go to the library.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is I' instead of 'I'. The correct subject pronoun 'I' should be used without 'Is'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Is I often go to library.

✓ I often go to the library.

The noun 'library' is a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× So whenever I have a free time, I go there to spend my peaceful time.

✓ So whenever I have free time, I go there to spend my peaceful time.

'Time' in this context is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. The phrase should be 'have free time'.

× And I like to go library because, umm, it helps me to focus on my studies as well as on reading.

✓ And I like to go to the library because, umm, it helps me to focus on my studies as well as on reading.

'Library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed before 'the library' to indicate movement towards a place.

× While in the library, I usually do some things like reading, uh, listening the podcast or some meaningful lessons from my mobile phone by using my Airpods so that I cannot distract or disturb anyone else in the library.

✓ While in the library, I usually do some things like reading, uh, listening to podcasts or some meaningful lessons from my mobile phone by using my AirPods so that I do not distract or disturb anyone else in the library.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'podcast' should be plural if referring to multiple episodes. 'Cannot' is better replaced with 'do not' to express the intended meaning of avoiding distraction.

× No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because it seems boring for me and I don't like to go there.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because it seemed boring to me and I didn't like to go there.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Seems' and 'don't like' should be changed to 'seemed' and 'didn't like' respectively to maintain tense consistency.

× So I never go to library in my childhood.

✓ So I never went to the library in my childhood.

'Library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'in my childhood'.

× So I never go to library in my childhood.

✓ So I never went to the library in my childhood.

The phrase 'in my childhood' indicates past time, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

× So I think that Chinese kids are more fond of going library and reading books.

✓ So I think that Chinese kids are more fond of going to the library and reading books.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' and the preposition 'to' when used with 'going' to indicate movement towards a place.