Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'in the weekend' nên dùng 'on the weekend'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library on the weekend with my friends because we like to study together and use the resources available there.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'book or dictionary' và 'improve my new world'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

예시: When I study in the library with my friend, I usually read books or use a dictionary to improve my vocabulary.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và số nhiều/số ít. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I preferred playing football with my friends.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng đại từ không phù hợp như 'your' trong câu trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they want to improve their vocabulary and study for exams.

× Yes, I often go to the library in the weekend with my friends.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library on the weekend with my friends.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'the weekend'. The correct preposition is 'on' because we use 'on' for days and specific times like 'the weekend'.

× And if we learn in a library with my friend sometime, I always book or dictionary in the library to improve my new world.

✓ Sometimes, when I study in the library with my friend, I always use a book or dictionary to improve my new words.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'learn in a library' is better expressed as 'study in the library'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Book or dictionary' needs an article and verb 'use' to make sense. 'Improve my new world' is incorrect; it should be 'improve my new words' or 'vocabulary'.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I were a child because when I was trying, I don't like go to the library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because when I was young, I didn't like going to the library.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. 'When I was trying' is unclear and likely meant 'when I was young'. 'I don't like go' is incorrect; it should be 'I didn't like going' to match past tense and correct verb form.

× I like playing football with my friend.

✓ I like playing football with my friends.

If the student usually goes with more than one friend, 'friends' (plural) is correct. If only one friend, 'friend' is correct. Context suggests plural is more appropriate here.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they want to improve your vocabulary.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they want to improve their vocabulary.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the subject is 'Chinese kids' (third person plural). The correct possessive pronoun is 'their' to match the subject.