Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ: "I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading online materials, but sometimes I visit it to find study resources."

예시: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading online materials, but sometimes I visit it to find study resources.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng chưa phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và dùng liên từ để nối ý, ví dụ: "I rarely go to the library, but when I do, I usually look for new study materials and try to learn something new."

예시: I rarely go to the library, but when I do, I usually look for new study materials and try to learn something new.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên từ, ví dụ: "I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house since I lived in a rural area."

예시: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house since I lived in a rural area.

제안: Câu trả lời không trực tiếp và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ: "I lived in Vietnam when I was a kid, so I don't know much about Chinese children's habits, but I think they often visit libraries."

예시: I lived in Vietnam when I was a kid, so I don't know much about Chinese children's habits, but I think they often visit libraries.

× I'm ready to go to the library and sometime I go to this to find out the material.

✓ I'm ready to go to the library and sometimes I go there to find materials.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate occasional action. Also, 'to this' is incorrect; it should be 'there' to refer to the library. 'Material' should be plural 'materials' when referring to study resources.

× For learning.

✓ For learning.

This is a sentence fragment without a verb, but since it is a short phrase, it is acceptable as an explanation. No preposition error here.

× I rally to go to the library, so if I have a chance to go this uh, I will find out the news materials for my studies and discover something new.

✓ I really like to go to the library, so if I have a chance to go there, I will find new materials for my studies and discover something new.

The word 'rally' is a typo; it should be 'really'. 'Go this' is incorrect; it should be 'go there' to refer to the library. 'News materials' is incorrect; it should be 'new materials'.

× When I was a kid I didn't go to the library because near my house is not have any library because it is a rural area so hardly to find out the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because there was no library near my house since it was a rural area, so it was hard to find a library.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'is not have' is incorrect; it should be 'there was no'. 'Hardly to find out' is incorrect; it should be 'it was hard to find'. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunctions and verb tenses to be grammatically correct.

× I live in Vietnam when I was a kid, so I don't know that the children in China often go to the library.

✓ I lived in Vietnam when I was a kid, so I don't know if children in China often go to the library.

The verb 'live' should be in past tense 'lived' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'that' should be 'if' to introduce an indirect question.

× But I think they often go to this.

✓ But I think they often go there.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect when referring to a place previously mentioned; 'there' is the correct pronoun to indicate a location.