Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'quite environment'는 부적절한 표현이며, 'hit the books'는 구어체로 적절하지만 문장 구조가 다소 어색합니다. 좀 더 명확하고 자연스러운 문장으로 바꾸고, 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment without distractions. I usually visit when I need to study hard for exams like finals or midterms.

제안: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 'read books or preparing, prepare my exam like finer or midterm' 부분은 명확하지 않고 중복됩니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 논리적으로 연결하고, 구체적인 내용을 추가하세요.

예시: I usually read books or prepare for exams such as finals and midterms because the library offers many learning resources. Also, I can concentrate better there than in other places.

제안: 문장이 길고 중복되며 문법 오류가 많습니다. 주제를 명확히 하고, 문장을 간결하게 구성하세요. 또한, 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다.

예시: When I was a kid, I didn't like going to the library because I found studying boring. However, now I appreciate it more.

제안: 문법과 어휘 사용이 부적절하며, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 'doing battle to study'는 부적절한 표현입니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 고치고, 관련된 구체적인 내용을 추가하세요.

예시: Actually, I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in Korea, parents often take their kids to the library to encourage them to study hard.

× The library is quite environment without distractions, so I decided to go to library when I need to hit the books like while final exam or midterm exams.

✓ The library is quite a quiet environment without distractions, so I decided to go to the library when I need to hit the books, like during final exams or midterm exams.

The word 'environment' needs an article 'a' and should be described with an adjective like 'quiet' to make sense. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'While final exam or midterm exams' should be 'during final exams or midterm exams' to indicate the time period correctly.

× I usually read books or preparing, prepare my exam like finer or midterm because the library supports the learning resources and also when I study in there I concentrate better than other places.

✓ I usually read books or prepare for my exams like finals or midterms because the library supports learning resources, and also when I study there, I concentrate better than in other places.

The phrase 'or preparing, prepare' is incorrect; it should be 'or prepare for' to correctly express the action. 'Finer' is a typo and should be 'finals'. 'In there' should be 'there', and 'than other places' should be 'than in other places' for correct preposition use.

× It depends on situations because when I was a kid I don't I didn't like to do homework and study because every every kids doesn't like it, you know.

✓ It depended on the situation because when I was a kid, I didn't like to do homework and study since every kid doesn't like it, you know.

The verb tense should be past tense 'depended' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Every every kids' is incorrect; it should be 'every kid' (singular). 'Doesn't' is acceptable here as a general truth, but 'didn't' could also be used for past context.

× So I think the library was a boring places when I was a kid, but now I.

✓ So I think the library was a boring place when I was a kid, but now I...

'Places' is plural but 'the library' is singular, so it should be 'a boring place'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected up to the given text.

× Actually I don't know a Chinese kid what to do, but in Korea the parents wants to go to the library with their kids because they want to their kids doing battle to study or something.

✓ Actually, I don't know what Chinese kids do, but in Korea, parents want to go to the library with their kids because they want their kids to study hard or something.

The phrase 'a Chinese kid what to do' is incorrect; it should be 'what Chinese kids do'. 'The parents wants' should be 'parents want' for subject-verb agreement. 'They want to their kids doing battle to study' is incorrect; it should be 'they want their kids to study hard' for correct verb and expression.