Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases like "I feel so stupid" and "this app there are very frankly." Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid irrelevant or incorrect expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment for studying. I usually borrow two or three books related to my courses to help with my research and assignments. Additionally, the library has useful apps that enhance my learning experience.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid confusing phrases like "continue my assignment as librarians" and incomplete sentences. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually go to the library to study and work on my assignments because it offers a quiet space. I also borrow books to support my research. Moreover, I use the library computers to access online resources and complete my work efficiently.

제안: Your answer contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "when I was killed" and "I usually do storybooks." Use past tense correctly and clearly describe your childhood experiences. Provide a direct answer with supporting details and use linking words for clarity.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child. I often read storybooks featuring fictional characters, which I really enjoyed. Most of the time, I visited the school library to find these books.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Avoid irrelevant or unclear statements. Provide a clear opinion supported by reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library. Libraries are accessible to the public, and children use them to read books and study. In fact, school libraries encourage students to develop good reading habits.

× Yeah, I often go to library because I feel so stupid and quite uncomfortable place to study.

✓ Yeah, I often go to the library because I feel it's a quite uncomfortable place to study.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required. Also, the sentence structure was awkward; adding 'it's' clarifies the meaning.

× I feel so stupid and quite uncomfortable place to study.

✓ I feel that it is a quite uncomfortable place to study.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'stupid' to describe the place, which is inappropriate. The phrase 'quite uncomfortable place' needs a linking verb and subject to be grammatically correct. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I usually borrow about two to three books at a time, mostly related to my studies.

✓ I usually borrow about two to three books at a time, mostly related to my studies.

This sentence is correct; no preposition errors found.

× Uh, this app there are very frankly, which makes ex experience even better.

✓ Uh, this app is very user-friendly, which makes the experience even better.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'There are very frankly' is incorrect. The correction provides a clear subject-verb structure and appropriate adjectives to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I usually go to library to study and continue my assignment as librarians.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library to study and continue my assignments as a librarian.

The phrase 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context, and 'librarians' should be singular 'a librarian' to agree with the subject.

× Quite uncomfortable space for that and usually I borrow books and prepare.

✓ It's quite an uncomfortable space for that, and usually I borrow books to prepare.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It's' provides a subject and verb. Also, 'prepare' needs an object or to be connected properly; adding 'to prepare' clarifies the purpose.

× Additionally I use the library computers to do my.

✓ Additionally, I use the library computers to do my work.

The sentence is incomplete; 'to do my' needs an object. Adding 'work' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Umm yes, I go to library when I was killed, but I usually do storybooks, the fiction characters during my childhood and I usually go to school libraries.

✓ Umm yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, and I usually read storybooks about fictional characters during my childhood, and I usually went to school libraries.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Killed' is a typo and should be 'kid'. 'Do storybooks' is incorrect; 'read storybooks' is appropriate. Also, 'fiction characters' should be 'fictional characters'. The sentence is corrected for tense consistency and vocabulary.

× Umm yes, I go to library when I was killed, but I usually do storybooks, the fiction characters during my childhood and I usually go to school libraries.

✓ Umm yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, and I usually read storybooks about fictional characters during my childhood, and I usually went to school libraries.

The phrase 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the fiction characters' should be 'fictional characters' without 'the' in this context.

× Why not? They can also go to the library.

✓ Why not? They can also go to the library.

This sentence is correct; no pronoun errors found.

× Umm, it's not like an industry that you cannot go to library or any description about that.

✓ Umm, it's not like a place where you cannot go to the library or anything like that.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Industry' is incorrect in this context; 'place' is more appropriate. 'Any description about that' is awkward; 'anything like that' is clearer.

× So yes, they can often also go through an update.

✓ So yes, they can often also go to the library.

The phrase 'go through an update' is incorrect and unrelated. The intended meaning is likely 'go to the library'. The correction replaces the phrase with the appropriate one.