Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library at my college because it has many books on programming, which is essential for my computer engineering studies. Moreover, the library provides a quiet environment that helps me focus better.

제안: Your answer is detailed but somewhat mechanical and repetitive. Try to make it more natural and concise by combining related ideas and using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Usually, I scan my access card at the entrance, then search for the section containing the books I need. After selecting a book, I inform the librarian before starting to read or borrow it.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library often as a child. Although my school had a small library with limited books, I occasionally visited it to study and read.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Avoid unnecessary information and focus on giving a clear, concise response. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I'm not very familiar with China, but I believe that many Chinese schools have libraries, and children often use them for studying and reading.

× I usually go in the library because lots of books are there on my programming because I'm a computer engineer

✓ I usually go to the library because there are lots of books on programming since I'm a computer engineer

The phrase 'lots of books are there' is incorrect in English. The correct structure is 'there are lots of books'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'to' when talking about going to a place like a library.

× I usually go in the library because lots of books are there

✓ I usually go to the library because there are lots of books

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used after 'go'. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place.

× in library I can get variety of books to get access

✓ in the library I can access a variety of books

The phrase 'get variety of books to get access' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'access a variety of books'. Also, 'in library' should be 'in the library' because 'library' is a specific place here.

× I have to get the access card scanned there in the beginning

✓ I have to get the access card scanned at the beginning

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'the beginning'. The correct preposition is 'at the beginning'.

× I have to just enter the library and search for the particular section of books which I want to get access to

✓ I just enter the library and search for the particular section of books to which I want to get access

The phrase 'which I want to get access to' ends with a preposition which is less formal. It is better to say 'to which I want to get access'. Also, 'have to just enter' is awkward; 'just enter' is sufficient.

× I used to visit there

✓ I used to visit it

The verb 'visit' is transitive and should be followed by an object, not a preposition like 'there'. So, 'visit it' is correct.

× they do, they might have this, every library is in the school and big libraries I I assume

✓ they might have a library in every school and big libraries, I assume

The original sentence is fragmented and uses pronouns incorrectly. 'They do, they might have this' is unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses pronouns properly.