Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too long and a bit unclear. Try to make your sentences shorter and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and finish your thoughts clearly. For example, say directly why you go to the library and what you do there.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to find information for my studies. It is a quiet place where I can focus and get academic resources. Sometimes, I also go there when I feel bored to read interesting books.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Try to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually read novels because I enjoy them. Besides novels, I also find many informative books there, so I can learn new things.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Try to start with a direct answer, then add details with linking words. Also, be careful with verb tenses and plural forms.

예시: When I was a child, I did not often go to the library. However, sometimes I went with my parents because they are educated. We also had a small library at home, so I usually read books there when I wanted to learn something.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and linking words. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct verb forms and connectors.

예시: As far as I know, many Chinese kids love to read in libraries because the atmosphere is excellent for studying. The quiet environment helps them concentrate fully on their work.

× Yes, I often go to library for resourcing and as well as whenever I need any kind of information and any kind of academic related topic need that time I go library and I find this resource from these places and whenever I feel like boring that time I.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library for resourcing and whenever I need any kind of information or any academic-related topic, I go to the library and find resources there. Also, whenever I feel bored, I go there.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context. Also, 'boring' should be 'bored' to correctly express the feeling.

× I usually whenever I go library I try to read something special for me in additional book like novels.

✓ Usually, whenever I go to the library, I try to read something special for me, like novels.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'in additional book' is awkward and unnecessary; simplifying to 'like novels' is clearer.

× I am interested in reading novels so I think libraries the great source of novels as well as informative books I can learn from there.

✓ I am interested in reading novels, so I think libraries are a great source of novels as well as informative books from which I can learn.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'libraries' to complete the sentence. Also, 'the great source' should be 'a great source' because it is one among many.

× When I was a child at that time I didn't often go to library, but sometimes I go with my parents because they are very educated person and in my house has a little library.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't often go to the library, but sometimes I went with my parents because they are very educated people and my house has a small library.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Person' should be plural 'people' to agree with 'they'. 'In my house has' is incorrect; it should be 'my house has'.

× So whenever I need to learn any kind of things I just read my home.

✓ So whenever I need to learn anything, I just read at home.

'Any kind of things' is awkward; 'anything' is better. 'Read my home' is incorrect; it should be 'read at home' to indicate location.

× As far as I know that more Chinese people actually they love to read from libraries because library atmosphere is really outstanding and especially for reading and concentration, whenever anyone read library, they can fully concentration about the study.

✓ As far as I know, many Chinese people actually love to read in libraries because the library atmosphere is really outstanding, especially for reading and concentration. Whenever anyone reads in the library, they can fully concentrate on their study.

'More Chinese people' should be 'many Chinese people' for correct quantifier use. 'Library atmosphere' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Read library' should be 'reads in the library' with correct verb form and preposition. 'Fully concentration' should be 'fully concentrate' as 'concentrate' is a verb here. 'About the study' should be 'on their study' for correct preposition and possessive pronoun.