Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by making the sentence more natural and adding a bit more detail. For example, instead of saying "the environment of library is very calm and peaceful," you could say "the library provides a calm and peaceful environment which helps me concentrate better." Also, try to avoid repeating the word "library" too often.

예시: Yes, I often visit the library because it offers a calm and peaceful environment that helps me focus on my studies without distractions.

제안: Your answer covers the main points but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the response more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "As we know, library is the hub of books," you could say "Moreover, the library is a hub of books, so I often borrow materials related to my course and personal interests."

예시: Usually, I go to the library to study and complete my assignments because it provides a quiet environment free from distractions. Moreover, the library is a hub of books, so I often borrow materials related to my course and personal interests.

제안: Your answer is understandable but the sentence structure and grammar need improvement for clarity and naturalness. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with details using linking words. For example, "Yes, when I was a kid, my school encouraged us to visit the library once a week during our library period, which helped us develop a habit of reading."

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, my school encouraged us to visit the library once a week during our library period, which helped us develop a habit of reading.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. For instance, "attend reading books or water books" is confusing. Use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence. You could say, "Yes, many Chinese children, especially in urban areas, often visit libraries. For example, during weekends, kids usually participate in reading sessions or borrow books to enhance their knowledge."

예시: Yes, many Chinese children, especially in urban areas, often visit libraries. For example, during weekends, kids usually participate in reading sessions or borrow books to enhance their knowledge.

× Yes, I often go to the library because the environment of library is very calm and peaceful.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because the environment of the library is very calm and peaceful.

The phrase 'environment of library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place already known to the listener, the definite article 'the' is required before singular nouns like 'library'. So, it should be 'the environment of the library'.

× Usually I go to the library to study and complete my assignments because it offered a quiet environment free from distraction.

✓ Usually I go to the library to study and complete my assignments because it offers a quiet environment free from distraction.

The sentence is in present tense describing a habitual action, so the verb 'offered' should be in present tense 'offers' to maintain tense consistency. Using past tense 'offered' here is incorrect because the action is ongoing or habitual.

× As we know, library is the hub of books and I also borrow books related to my course and according to my interest I use.

✓ As we know, the library is the hub of books and I also borrow books related to my course and according to my interest I use them.

The noun 'library' here refers to a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I use' which is incomplete; adding 'them' clarifies the object of 'use'.

× From primary classes, school made our habit to go to the library when our library period comes in a week.

✓ From primary classes, school made it our habit to go to the library when our library period came in a week.

The phrase 'made our habit' is incorrect; it should be 'made it our habit'. Also, 'comes' should be in past tense 'came' to match the past context indicated by 'made'.

× Then we used to go to the library as a kid.

✓ Then we used to go to the library as kids.

The phrase 'as a kid' is singular, but 'we' is plural, so it should be 'as kids' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit library, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

✓ Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit the library, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier.

The noun 'library' here refers to a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× For example, during weekends it's common for kids to attend reading books or water books to improve their knowledge.

✓ For example, during weekends it's common for kids to read books or borrow books to improve their knowledge.

The phrase 'attend reading books or water books' is incorrect. 'Attend' is not used with 'reading books', and 'water books' is incorrect. The correct verbs are 'read books' and 'borrow books'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verbs.