Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using complete sentences and avoiding repetition. Also, add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading history books, which help me learn about the past.

제안: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be more specific and avoid redundancy for clarity.

예시: In the library, I usually read history books, but sometimes I also read books related to my field, such as engineering topics like electrical machines and high voltage, to increase my knowledge.

제안: Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your experiences.

예시: Yes, I was very interested in going to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed reading newspapers and looking at the pictures. It made me feel happy and informed about current events.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to learn and improve their knowledge. For example, many of them study technology-related subjects there, which helps them excel in this field.

× I just I go mostly library to read some books like histories because I like to read the history books.

✓ I mostly go to the library to read some books like history because I like to read history books.

The word 'library' needs the preposition 'to' before it, and 'histories' should be 'history' as it refers to the subject in general. Also, 'I just I go mostly library' is incorrect word order and redundancy; it should be 'I mostly go to the library'.

× Yes I go library for reading the books, history books, sometime my related my field related books like engineering books, electrical machines, high voltage.

✓ Yes, I go to the library to read books, history books, and sometimes books related to my field like engineering books, electrical machines, and high voltage.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'for reading the books' should be 'to read books' to express purpose correctly. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The phrase 'my related my field related books' is redundant and unclear; it should be 'books related to my field'.

× These types of books I am interested to read to increase my knowledge.

✓ I am interested in reading these types of books to increase my knowledge.

The phrase 'interested to read' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'interested in reading'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing the subject first.

× Yes, I'm very interested to go in library when I was a kid, so I'm very happy to see the newspaper and reads and even I saw the graphics.

✓ Yes, I was very interested in going to the library when I was a kid, so I was very happy to see the newspapers and read them, and I even saw the graphics.

The sentence refers to past events, so present tense 'I'm' should be past tense 'I was'. 'Interested to go in library' should be 'interested in going to the library'. 'See the newspaper and reads' is incorrect; it should be 'see the newspapers and read them'.

× So I feel very good and sometime I'm interested to updated news to read.

✓ So I felt very good and sometimes I was interested in reading updated news.

The verb tense should be past 'felt' to match the past context. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Interested to updated news to read' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in reading updated news'.

× Yes, sure, the Chinese kids mostly go to the library to learn and to increase their knowledge.

✓ Yes, sure, Chinese kids mostly go to the library to learn and increase their knowledge.

The phrase 'the Chinese kids' is acceptable but often 'Chinese kids' without 'the' is more natural in general statements. No major plural issue here, but slight improvement.

× Many time I see the Chinese kids go to the library for mostly they are topping in the technology if we will see so how they are learning and.

✓ Many times I see Chinese kids go to the library because they mostly top in technology; if we observe, we can see how they are learning.

'Many time' should be 'Many times'. 'For mostly they are topping in the technology' is incorrect; it should be 'because they mostly top in technology'. The sentence was incomplete and unclear; it has been restructured for clarity and correctness.