Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like "he always study"; it should be "he always studies."

예시: Yes, I often go to the library near my home because my grandma encourages me to study there with my brother, who always studies in that library.

제안: Make your answer more natural by using varied vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating "do," use synonyms and correct verb forms.

예시: Usually, I do my assignments in the library and look for books related to my homework. Additionally, I conduct some research to deepen my understanding.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it coherent. Also, avoid informal phrases like "chill" in formal speaking tests. Use past tense consistently.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library frequently when I was in elementary school. There was a large library on campus, and we could enter as long as we had our IDs. We went there to relax, socialize, and sometimes to research for our homework.

제안: Make your answer more general and avoid relying on a single example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar, such as "I had" to "I have" and "he is always" to "he is always." Also, avoid informal phrases like "which is good."

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to study. For instance, I have a Chinese friend who spends a lot of time there, and he sometimes invites me to study with him, which helps me improve.

× Yes, I often go to the library near our area because my grandma always encourages me to go with my brother since he always study there.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library near our area because my grandma always encourages me to go with my brother since he always studies there.

The verb 'study' should be in the third person singular form 'studies' to agree with the singular subject 'he'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× What I usually do in the library is do my assignments and look for books that is related to my homework and do a little bit of research.

✓ What I usually do in the library is do my assignments and look for books that are related to my homework and do a little bit of research.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'books', which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to match the plural subject.

× We had this big library around the campus and we always go there as long as we have our IDs.

✓ We had this big library around the campus and we always went there as long as we had our IDs.

The verb tense should be consistent in the past tense since the sentence refers to past events. 'Go' and 'have' should be changed to 'went' and 'had' respectively.

× We go there to chill, to hang out, or even research some homework.

✓ We went there to chill, to hang out, or even research some homework.

Since the context is about past events, the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes I agree the Chinese kids always go to the library because I had a Chinese friend and every time I saw him on school he is always sitting in the library studying.

✓ Yes, I agree the Chinese kids always go to the library because I had a Chinese friend and every time I saw him at school he was always sitting in the library studying.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; it should be 'at' when referring to being present at a place like school. Also, 'he is always sitting' should be 'he was always sitting' to match the past tense context.

× Yes I agree the Chinese kids always go to the library because I had a Chinese friend and every time I saw him on school he is always sitting in the library studying.

✓ Yes, I agree the Chinese kids always go to the library because I had a Chinese friend and every time I saw him at school he was always sitting in the library studying.

The correct preposition to use with 'school' when referring to location is 'at', not 'on'. Using 'on' is incorrect in this context.

× However, he also invites me to study with him which is good.

✓ However, he also invited me to study with him which was good.

Since the context is about past events, the verbs 'invites' and 'is' should be in the past tense 'invited' and 'was' to maintain tense consistency.