Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi thiếu tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, ví dụ như 'No, I'm not' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I don't go to the library often. I usually visit it when I need a quiet place to read or when I want to look up words in the dictionary.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu dài không rõ ràng. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít trong câu.

예시: In the library, I usually borrow expensive books that I can't afford to buy. Also, I sometimes buy exercise books to practice what I learn.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'My mom usually take me' thay vì 'takes me'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm của bạn.

예시: Yes, I did. My mom often took me to the Uh Kim Dong library where I enjoyed reading Japanese comics like Xinjiang Comics, which features a boy named Shinosuke.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'for the first target is'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cung cấp ý kiến cá nhân hoặc thông tin cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: From what I've seen in movies, Chinese kids often go to the library to study in groups because it helps them improve their skills better than studying alone.

× No, I'm not.

✓ No, I don't.

The student used 'I'm not' which is incorrect in response to 'Do you often go to the library?'. The correct negative response is 'No, I don't' because the question is about frequency of an action, not a state of being.

× I just go to the library when I want to have a peaceful space to read book or when I want to find the dictionary.

✓ I just go to the library when I want to have a peaceful space to read books or when I want to find a dictionary.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, and 'the dictionary' should be 'a dictionary' because it is not a specific dictionary previously mentioned.

× Well, in the library I usually find some books that are very expensive and I don't have money to buy it.

✓ Well, in the library I usually find some books that are very expensive and I don't have money to buy them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular noun, but 'books' is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun.

× So I usually go to the library to borrow it from the library and read it or I will buy some books, some exercise book that I need to practice.

✓ So I usually go to the library to borrow them from the library and read them or I will buy some books, some exercise books that I need to practice with.

The pronouns 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'books'. Also, 'exercise book' should be plural 'exercise books' and 'practice' needs the preposition 'with' to be correct.

× My mom usually take me to Uh Kim Dong library to read uh.

✓ My mom usually took me to Uh Kim Dong library to read.

The verb 'take' should be in past tense 'took' because the question is about past habits when the student was a kid.

× Xinjiang Comics is a Japanese comic comic with a crayon boy named Shinosuke.

✓ Xinjiang Comics is a Japanese comic with a crayon boy named Shinosuke.

The word 'comic' is repeated unnecessarily. It should appear only once.

× As I see in the movie, I saw that Chinese kids often go to the library for the first target is they go to the library to study in a group that help help them improve their skill better than study alone.

✓ As I saw in the movie, Chinese kids often go to the library. Their main reason is to study in groups that help them improve their skills better than studying alone.

The phrase 'As I see in the movie' should be past tense 'As I saw in the movie'. The sentence structure is awkward and repetitive; it is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Help help' is a repetition error. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'. 'Study alone' should be 'studying alone' to match the gerund form after 'better than'.