Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "different classes in university" and use smoother phrasing. Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to study for exams or read storybooks during my free time between classes at university.

제안: Your answer has some grammar errors and lacks coherence. Avoid mixing unrelated activities like talking with friends and studying in the same sentence without clear linking. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb forms for clarity.

예시: I usually go to the library to study because it is peaceful and quiet, which helps me concentrate. Sometimes, I also meet with friends there to discuss group projects.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use correct past tense forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to be more specific about why you didn't go to the library as a child.

예시: Not really. When I was a kid, I didn't find it necessary to go to the library because I preferred studying and playing at home, especially in my room.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more direct and concise. Avoid repeating similar words like "job and their work and studies." Also, try to use linking words to make your reasoning clearer.

예시: I'm not sure, but I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in China, and many children spend time studying there.

× I usually go to the library for my university, so I talking with my friends there or also when I have some important work I do it because this place is full of peace and silence.

✓ I usually go to the library for my university, so I talk with my friends there or also when I have some important work I do it because this place is full of peace and silence.

The verb 'talking' is incorrectly used here. After 'so I', the base form of the verb 'talk' should be used instead of the '-ing' form. The '-ing' form is used for continuous tenses or as gerunds, but here a simple present tense verb is needed to match the sentence structure.

× So I didn't went to library and did everything I wanted in our house, especially in my room and my desk.

✓ So I didn't go to the library and did everything I wanted in our house, especially in my room and at my desk.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'went' is incorrect and should be 'go'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Additionally, 'at my desk' is more appropriate than 'in my desk' because one is located at a desk, not inside it.