Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: La teva resposta és una mica confusa i llarga. Intenta ser més clara i concisa, evitant repeticions com "to to" i estructurant millor la frase per fer-la més natural i efectiva.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library now. I used to visit it a lot as a child because I loved reading books, but nowadays I don't have enough time.

제안: La teva resposta és una mica repetitiva i conté errors com "to to". Prova d'organitzar millor les idees i utilitzar connectors per fer la resposta més coherent i natural.

예시: When I visit the library, I usually look for fantasy books because I enjoy that genre. Moreover, the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate and relax while reading.

제안: La resposta és clara però pot ser més natural si evites estructures una mica rígides i utilitzes connectors per millorar la fluïdesa.

예시: Yes, definitely. My mother always encouraged me to go to the library because she knew I loved books, so I was eager to visit it regularly.

제안: La resposta és poc clara i manca de vocabulari específic. Intenta respondre directament i utilitzar vocabulari més precís i connectors per donar suport a la teva opinió.

예시: I am not sure about the exact statistics, but I believe Chinese children often visit libraries because they are disciplined and use them as quiet places to study.

× No, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I was this book rat and sadly nowadays I don't have time to to attend the library but it's a place.

✓ No, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I was this book rat and sadly nowadays I don't have time to attend the library but it's a place.

The phrase 'to to attend' contains a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. The infinitive form requires only one 'to' before the verb. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the sentence.

× When I go to the library I usually go because you can find different type of books and I'm very interested in fantasy books and it's a place where you can find an amazing atmosphere to to read and stay calm.

✓ When I go to the library I usually go because you can find different types of books and I'm very interested in fantasy books and it's a place where you can find an amazing atmosphere to read and stay calm.

The phrase 'different type of books' should be pluralized to 'different types of books' because 'different' implies more than one type, so the noun should be plural. Also, the repeated 'to' before 'read' is incorrect and should be removed.

× When I go to the library I usually go because you can find different type of books and I'm very interested in fantasy books and it's a place where you can find an amazing atmosphere to to read and stay calm.

✓ When I go to the library I usually go because you can find different types of books and I'm very interested in fantasy books and it's a place where you can find an amazing atmosphere to read and stay calm.

The phrase 'to to read' contains a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. The infinitive form requires only one 'to' before the verb. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, for sure, for my mother was very important to bring me to the library because she knew I was obsessed with books and I was very keen to go always.

✓ Yes, for sure, for my mother it was very important to bring me to the library because she knew I was obsessed with books and I was always very keen to go.

The phrase 'for my mother was very important' is missing the subject 'it' to clarify the sentence structure. Also, 'keen to go always' is awkward; 'always' should be placed before 'very keen' to improve natural word order.

× Actually, I ignore any survey that talks about the frequency that Chinese people go to the library, but I think that they are very disciplined and maybe it's a place where they can study.

✓ Actually, I ignore any survey that talks about the frequency with which Chinese people go to the library, but I think that they are very disciplined and maybe it's a place where they can study.

The phrase 'the frequency that Chinese people go' is better expressed as 'the frequency with which Chinese people go' to correctly use the preposition with 'frequency' and improve formality and clarity.