Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve kısa tutmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlenizi güçlendirebilirsiniz.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because there aren't many near where I live. However, recently I've been trying to visit more often since my mom now allows me to go out alone.

제안: Bu soruya cevap vermemişsiniz. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayarak başlayın ve ardından detaylar ekleyin. Örneğin, kütüphanede ne tür aktiviteler yaptığınızı açıklayın.

예시: Usually, I read books or study quietly in the library because it is a peaceful place. Sometimes, I also use the computers there to do research for my school projects.

제안: Cevabınız çok kısa ve detay içermiyor. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtladıktan sonra, geçmiş deneyimleriniz hakkında daha fazla bilgi verin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi genişletin.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading storybooks. It was a great place for me to learn and have fun.

제안: Bu soruya daha kapsamlı bir cevap vermeye çalışın. Bilginiz yoksa, tahmin yürütebilir veya genel bir görüş belirtebilirsiniz. Bu, konuşmanızı daha doğal ve etkili yapar.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly because education is very important in China.

× No, I don't because there are not so many libraries in that area that I live.

✓ No, I don't because there aren't many libraries in the area where I live.

The phrase 'there are not so many libraries' is awkward and less natural. The correct form is 'there aren't many libraries' to express a negative quantity. Also, 'in that area that I live' is incorrect; it should be 'in the area where I live' to properly indicate location.

× But in the last couple of months I'm trying to go more because I'm growing up and my mom finally lets me go out alone so.

✓ But in the last couple of months, I've been trying to go more because I'm growing up and my mom finally lets me go out alone.

The phrase 'I'm trying' is present continuous, but since the action started in the past and continues to the present, present perfect continuous 'I've been trying' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'so' which is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.