Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子稍显冗长，建议简化表达并适当使用连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus better. Moreover, the calm atmosphere helps me avoid distractions from my smartphone and home noise, which improves my work efficiency.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Actually, I rarely read books in the library because I can access them on my smartphone. Instead, I usually do my schoolwork there since the quiet environment helps me concentrate and finish my assignments.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（时态和主谓一致），表达不够清晰，建议加强语法准确性并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I loved reading, so I often went to the library to find books that interested me. I also enjoyed reading stories and comics there because it was a relaxing activity compared to my current busy life.

제안: 回答内容相关，但表达略显简单，建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使观点更有说服力。

예시: Actually, Chinese kids do not often go to the library because, with rapid technological development, they spend more time on their smartphones. Consequently, mobile games attract them more, which I believe is an unfortunate trend that deserves our attention.

× Yes, when I were a kid I used to be very into reading so I usually go there to search the books I'm interested in.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I used to be very into reading so I usually went there to search for the books I was interested in.

这里的主语是第一人称单数，过去时态应该用was而不是were；另外，描述过去习惯动作时，动词也应使用过去时went；'search the books'应改为'search for the books'，因为search后面通常接介词for。

× Also I can find some nice stories and comics which without high pressure like current.

✓ Also I can find some nice stories and comics which are without high pressure like currently.

这里缺少动词，'which without'应改为'which are without'；'like current'中的'current'应改为副词形式'currently'，表示'像现在这样'。

× Actually they are not, because with the rapid development of technology, the kids nowadays are on the their smartphone.

✓ Actually they are not, because with the rapid development of technology, kids nowadays are on their smartphones.

'the kids'前不需要定冠词'the'，应直接用'kids'；'the their smartphone'中'the'和'their'重复，应去掉'the'；'smartphone'应使用复数形式'smartphones'，因为指的是一般的孩子们各自的手机。

× So the games on the smartphone may be more attracted to them.

✓ So the games on the smartphone may be more attractive to them.

'attracted'是过去分词，表示被动含义，这里应使用形容词'attractive'表示'有吸引力的'。