Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ студента не соответствует вопросу, он повторяет вопрос экзаменатора вместо ответа. Следует отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя простое предложение, чтобы показать понимание и умение строить ответ.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать повторов. Также можно добавить детали, чтобы ответ был более содержательным и связным.

예시: I usually read books in the library, especially novels and educational materials, because it helps me learn new things.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует использовать прошедшее время и правильные формы глаголов. Также стоит объяснить причину более ясно и связно.

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library in my country at that time.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и формы глаголов, а также более точные слова. Можно добавить детали для обоснования ответа.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they like reading books and want to learn other languages.

× I usually I usually reading a book.

✓ I usually read a book.

The original sentence has a repeated phrase 'I usually' and uses the incorrect verb form 'reading' instead of the base form 'read' after 'usually'. The adverb 'usually' should be followed by the base verb in present simple tense. To improve, remove the repetition and use the correct verb form.

× No, I'm not going to the library when I when I was a kid because we doesn't have in our country a library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because we didn't have a library in our country.

The sentence incorrectly uses present continuous 'I'm not going' and present tense 'doesn't have' to describe past events. The correct past tense forms 'didn't go' and 'didn't have' should be used. Also, the phrase 'in our country a library' is incorrectly ordered; it should be 'a library in our country'. To improve, use past tense verbs and correct word order.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are like books and they want learning another languages.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they like books and they want to learn other languages.

The phrase 'they are like books' is incorrect; it should be 'they like books' to express preference. Also, 'they want learning' is incorrect; after 'want' the base verb with 'to' should be used: 'want to learn'. 'Another languages' is incorrect; 'other languages' is the correct plural form. To improve, use correct verb forms and plural adjectives.